(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I think it looks pretty nice but it could still us a bit more so i would really like to know what NGU thinks of my work. This is my second try at a sig.

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Any criticisism (besides anything about my spelling) would be appreciated

It looks pretty nice for a 2nd signature

The C4Ds look awkward to me the way they look put in there
maybe darken the render?

Overall really boring and dull. Try adding some more colors(don't go crazy and add rainbow colors and shit, not what I mean) try adding some depth cuz atm it looks really flat. And about the bg, again pretty plain. Smudge any c4d, and change the blending mode to see how it looks on the bg.