Agreed with Low Key about the text, but disagree about the effects and depth.
Way. Too. Bright. Let's get that out of the way first. The effects are good, they've got potential, but they're drowned out in this sea of white light that makes the focal hard to distinguish as well as the effects. I also don't see much depth in here, mostly because I can't see anything but the focal thanks to all of the white.
did u look to the right with not text? lol. yeah theres depth but its kinda bright, shit went crazy around 2am lol. i swear the colorblindness makes things look way better for me its weird