Would look so much better if the stock suited it, but it doesn't, and that alone takes it down a few notches for me. The stock is just too dark, and in no way compliments the piece. A suitable suggestion next time, would be to find a brighter stock and ctrl+u until it blends with the image.
Text also needs working on, needs to be bolder, and placement is just off. Use the rule of thirds on nearly all sigs, as God made it.