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yeah i know i need more work but what do u think i can add to make it better?

thats your best so far imo,i think you should lower the opacity of the smudging a bit
4/5

i think, cut loads off the width (not compress in, actually cut), sort out the border (thin black border), lower the opacity of smuding like da-legend said and it will look alot better

thx alot guys i will keep making more with ur guys advice!