The hair takes up way too much room and the colors are all a little too close on the color spectrum. Use a wider range (complementary colors, or three-point color scheme would work here) but in general I just think you need to try a different stock/render.
Also, you can call me Dep or _Dep lol, RS* is just the name of a graphics team I had started on another forum and still use to refer to myself (since it pretty much died).
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one thing i notice alot about stocks people tend to over do the brightness of the background cause the focal point which should be the woman to get less attention also the colors are far to similar to each other causing the background to be dull mess around a little with the contrast of each color so you can make them more distinctive from each other
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