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Though nothing change but the beams, I like it.
A little CnC wouldn't hurt but I didn't really try.

yuck
get rid of the glowing line (its pretty nooby when used like that)
other than that looks good
like the clipping masks

The glowing line should go over her head at the top not under it
And its also very empty but the text go's well in it

As Videobot said take the glowing line away. It is indeed "nooby".

The Concept is good and the clipping masks are good and I also like the text. I think it could do with just a little bit more.

I'll get a v2 in a few minutes. I am though, very in need materials to be honest.

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