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Positive & Negative Critics are welcome, as long as you give me an in-depth explanation on how I can improve it.

Nice edit, really shows that you know what ur doing. But if it were me, i would keep it slightly cleaner, with less distortion and effects. This in my opinion makes the edit seem much more proffesional.


But still very good, these were just some contrucive critic.

dude thats dirty :black: and sure you could've gone with a cleaner feel, but honestly thats just somebody's personal opinion... if you want to go for a crazy feel, go for it. also the sound at the end could use a bit of work as it seems out of sync with the music

That was SEXY! Nothing you could improve on IMO, you have a nice style!