Post: Am i getting better?
08-31-2011, 03:54 AM #1
Mr.Graphics
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08-31-2011, 04:11 AM #2
videobot34
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again with the monotone (its really wrecking your work)
and fix the text
its pretty boring
its a nice use of c4ds though
08-31-2011, 04:43 AM #3
Mr.Graphics
NextGenUpdate <3
Originally posted by videobot34 View Post
again with the monotone (its really wrecking your work)
and fix the text
its pretty boring
its a nice use of c4ds though

sorry man , i have no clue what mono tone , ive been just going at and practicing without knowign any of these terms :/ explain ?
08-31-2011, 06:34 AM #4
Surikizu
GUMI fanboy
Monotone... I think he his trying to says that its bit plain? idk
08-31-2011, 07:23 AM #5
videobot34
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Originally posted by GFX View Post
sorry man , i have no clue what mono tone , ive been just going at and practicing without knowign any of these terms :/ explain ?


oh sorry
"sameness of tone or color, sometimes to a boring degree."
basicly its all the same colour
try choosing complimentary colours
08-31-2011, 08:45 AM #6
FoxkaZ
Retired Super
Hmm, maybe the render is a bit to much in the center. Also there isn't much... Atmosphere to it. But I kind of like it still. Smile
08-31-2011, 03:02 PM #7
Way too monotone bro...
Try experimenting with different colors.
If you like blue, try Cyan and Magenta.
08-31-2011, 03:37 PM #8
Mr.Graphics
NextGenUpdate <3
Originally posted by videobot34 View Post
oh sorry
"sameness of tone or color, sometimes to a boring degree."
basicly its all the same colour
try choosing complimentary colours

thanks man ill make a new one !

---------- Post added at 10:37 AM ---------- Previous post was at 10:37 AM ----------

Originally posted by FoxkaZ View Post
Hmm, maybe the render is a bit to much in the center. Also there isn't much... Atmosphere to it. But I kind of like it still. Smile

thanks man i appreciate ur feed back !
08-31-2011, 06:08 PM #9
Sempiternal
Previously uG~ Wounded
It is very common to your other tags, Try experimenting with different styles until you find one that you are happy with :y:

Here's your cons of this one mate. Remember this is just constructive criticism:

1: I feel like the render is too centered. Not always a bad thing but You have added literally no depth what so ever to him, I think you need to work on that more :y:
2: Yes, as the others have said it is mono-tone. Basically monotone is when the signature is simply whored with the same colours or blue for example. try using colours that compliment blue, Such as pink perhaps Smile
3: I like the flow of the sig, You seem to be showing an improvement with that however the small c4d used to the right and left of his head disturbs that flow and to be frank, doesn't really look good in my opinion.
4: Lastly, I think you should add a light source, it adds depth and makes the tag look more realistic, but then remember to make the lighting correct, do that via the dodge and burn tool, or simply go to filter>render>lighting effects. And play around with that Winky Winky

Keep up the enthusiasm and keep reading tutorials. Deviantarts would be the best place for that :y:

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