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umm im new to this if u like it hanks and sorry if you dont
and can someone make a video for just me on how i can improve cause im going to be making video on how im improving and posting them here thanks

um ur c4ds r not that good and u should not cover ur focal point

idk what he said but it looks messy

the focal point which is bumblebee is covered and effects r not that good and dont fit, add a border, i know my text never fits but the text on urs is not that good

Sorry dude, but that is fugly even for a beginner. The C4D's aren't supposed to cover you're main focal, the text is way off, The C4D itsellf is just soo ugly, you should try to get more out of the background by trying to use stocks (well that what i do :p). The render selection (the part of the renderr you chose to show) don't look to great on my screen because of the size of the sig. I would have made the render bigger (remember to hold shift and drag the corner to keep it in proportion). 1/5 you could do better

the c4d is terrible and the txt dont go wit the render or bckground sorry

the text doesnt go with the sig at all, and youve conered up the focal point with a messy c4d, and there is no boarder, look at soe tutorials and then try again