Originally posted by Renegdr
Looks good but it doesn't feel like you've interacted with the focal at all, just put some effects on top of it and left it at that. No depth at all to it. While the effects are decent, without any depth to it they look very out of place. Try moving some of the splatters behind the focal, even if you were to just use a layer mask and erase bits covering her. Apart from that, I think the only other issue is the text, the colours really don't work well. Pick some colours from the original piece for the squares and something not as bold as a bright blue for the text itself. Maybe move it further down closer to her shoulder as well.
thanks its just that lately I have been trying out new styles cause like before i used to work with renders and all i did was add a couple good c4d's a good stock image and clipping masks so like idk I've been trying new style but thanks for the feedback