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V1

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V2

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Kinda fixed the elbow

I know it is smudge but I find it is the only thing I am good with ><

I think I saw one like this.. in exact same way.. >.>

alrite lets start off with wats good

the text- thats cool wat u did with the name and sotw thing and it fits
smudge- ur good at smudging and it looks very good and it has flow
border- the border is good, not to big not to small just rite

now the bad stuff

Its plain on the sides, add some c4ds or brushes or sumthing
and i think its to dark well i mean like the light source is way to dim or is it just my screen? lol

Looks great all except the smudged elbow on the right. It somewhat doesn't belong IMO. Try smudging around his shoulders instead.

I really like the flow you gave with C4D around his arm.
Intermediate 4/5

See? Stop being lazy all the time and write out something like this =]

Thanks Rick, No C4D's though =]

Tried to fix the elbow =\

Nice love the blending and the bg goes really well just the clipping mask looks quite fat 4/5