well since im guessing ur a beginner and new to site ill say that first off the text is way to big and it takes away the focus of ur focal which also should be bigger and it looks like ur render(focal) looks like u set the opacity to color or put a gradient map over it and then ur borders r too big also. The effects r okay but next time u should put them behind ur render so that ppl can focus on ur effects and render at the same time which looks better and also ur render isnt blending to well and for a rating 2/5 since ur beginning but u should fix these and look on some more tuts to get better