Main points to work on;
-Lighting. In my opinion I would tone down the lighting on the render and the left/right sides of the background.
-Text. Personally I wouldn't put the text where it is now as it is near the focal point and SOMETIMES you don't want the text to be recognized as much.
-Flow. If you mess around with the compositioning of the render, because at the moment it is centered so it would be hard to pull of decent flow especially with a background like so.
On topic though, cover them titties because they're is young members on this site *COUGH*MERKII*COUGH*. No really nice tag bro nice smudging going on there