umm, i wouldnt say this is as good as your last, its too noisy.. i hate noise >.<, the render placement isnt great, dont always put your render on one side, also i dont really like the big blue blob or the colour of the text, follow some tutorials on effects etc
I like that round shaped thing on the left end that is nice looking. I also really like the the stars around mario they look cool . I would say that is about a 8/10 good job dude!