(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Hey guys i just finished this:

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Once again any cnc will be appreciated.

Thanks^

HOW ABOUT THIS THEN:
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More ANiiMaTiiOnN?!??! i hate animation :p.

Ok here goes

To start your render needs some more blending, do some smudging etc. Its also a little plain because i can see you've turned your opacity on the C4D fractals or w/e and they're hard to spot. Try changing the blending options of them not the opacity. Im not particularly liking the design of the border etc. but thats more opinion, the text is good because it suits the design. Try using some more and better C4Ds (avoid fractals) dont worry it will usually say i its a fractal or not and once you've seen a few you'll know what they look like. Also try using some more brushes around the render etc. Its a good start to the sig but it looks unfinished. Gl hope i helped.

Here's some resources if you need them:

Photoshop Brushes:
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Take a look through them, some are really good.

Renders/C4Ds:
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Sadly you have to register to get the rendered form and full sized. Its free so you should be alright.

thanks for the cnc.
can u gimme an idea of what 2 put in front of the gun('luks unfinished'?
also, i didnt use c4c but diff brushes(luks like c4c)

thanks

CAN U CHECK THE NEW ONE POSTED ABOVE?
THANKS

Its very cool Personaly I don't need to give cNc it rules,
#1 is the best The 2nd dosen't look good

i Prefer number two but you shouldn't change the opacity of the render, or brush over him, try having him near the front of all layers on full opacity and blend him in, try smudging. Also try to use some C4D's and different brushes. Id also advise you add a border

gl, hope i helped

thanks for the help

i'll add a aborder soon