(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Hey ya'll hope you like this series, recording my good and bad edits on the road to become a professional editor, I'll also be doing IRL edits as well.
Feedback Is GREATLY Appreciated

I like it, but one thing. The text at 0:27 just looks horrible. If you ever need text PM me, I do gfx, I could make you some text. Meaning: 3D.

Alright thanks man! do you have a skype?

What did you use for those effects DDDD

Yes, my skype is: Razorcut2015

Fix the text, use Cinema 4D or something to use 3D text :p It looks horrible to be completely honest with you. As for the color correction, it looks great, but don't completely change the whole color of the screen, use some variants :y:

Great job as a beginner bro, keep it up.

The intro looks very professional and then in the actual video you use 2d text that isn't very well tracked...
other than that its good!
And also one thing...
I could only notice that the first clip was taken from an OCE competition...
I wonder if the second one is too...