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It's too bright you need to tone that down a lot. The lighting is also off a bit. The rays of light there should brighten up his arms and torso?
Remove the boarders and try to get the colours to flow better Maybe use some orange/yellow soft brushing to enhance the lighting of the rays.

Well first thing is horrible render choice tbh low quility look for something in a larger size with clairity aswell as plenty of color unless you plan for a black and white a monotone or coloring it yourself.