You've messed this up a bit ^^ and ill tells ya why.. You've got the effects and all nailed for a nice lookin sig, I also like how its relatively simple. The problem is that its way too long... and as a result there's lots of random blankness which makes the whole sig look emptier.. However it is still very nice VGood Job man.
You're getting better.
The left side looks way too hectic though , you should've spreaded all your effects a little more.
Also , the diffirence between the blurred part and the sharpened is a little too big , try to work on that