Originally posted by Depression
Not too shabby. I have a friend who made a tag similar to this, but it's over two years old, lol.
Anyway, the first thing I want to say is that you need to utilize the brushes more to blend the render into the tag. And don't blur the brushes so much, or sharpen them too much either. Both look bad.
But the biggest thing I want to mention here is flow. The way the tag should flow is like:
[\\\\\\\\\\\\\\/////////////]
like you have around the render's bottom, and with the angled effects on the right and skyline on the left. But there are some effects and brushes that are working against the flow. Can you see them?
i tryed making the flow going this way //, theres arrows going that way and the bulding scanlines go the same way also, the only thing i see going the opposite is the splatter on the building its going \\
thats wat ur talking about?