(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); my 4TH so yeh i rely enjoy doin stuff like dis, please only constructive criticism thanks - Wow cheerz guys, i took in what u said i havnt quite finished but this is it now

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its too big and plain on sides the smudgin is ok but overall very simples and i used that render in my sig >>>> You must login or register to view this content.

OoOoO that would prob look good if it had a little bit more to it leave the smudging but blend it in with a black background and some neat text

wow this sig actually has some very good potential keep working on it

Hmm its a good start. However the smudging is way too all over the place, you want to try and create some flow, and with smudging like that, it has to really all be in the same sort of direction. There's no real light source, just create a new layer and play around ith a large soft white brush. I think its too big, but thats opinion so ill leave that up to you. Finally try playing with some C4D's and brushes and watch some tuts.

Its a nice start to a sig and i hope you'll keep doing more and improving.

kl umm well thanks its not finished i think this is MUCH better