Floating head. And floating hand. No real good flow. Lighting and depth need work.
Oh, and I lol'd at this:
Originally posted by another user
Originally Posted by +SFX. Dynasty
OMG lol dude i used like atleast 10 c4ds and like 3 stocks and a bunch of gradient maps and a few photo filters lol
...So? You can do as much as you want to it, and it could still be plain. It all depends on _how_ you put it all together.