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Ok took your suggestions and made it a lil better.

yup best one i give it 5/5 since your like a beginner-intermidiat guy

wow i usually try to find the little things to tell u to fix but i cant seem to find anything...
i guess the only thing that looks weird is where the legs connect to the body of the render... it looks like legs are not even part of his body lol but thats the render...

what you did with the render was awesome i give it 5/5

its ur best one so far but unfortunately i do have 1 tiny problem with it and thats the white soft brushes on the bottom edges of the sig i think it would be better if u got rid of them imo

The text is horrible, and like burn said the white edges should go. Otherwise i dont see any really problems, the colours are a little harsh, id use some more gradient maps and filters etc. but overall pretty good imo.

Work on making your effects flow with the render, and try not overpowering the background with a gigantic render.

Took your suggestions and made it better. What you think?

Wow it looks amazing in my opinion 5/5

Text is worse in this one, and you didn't touch the flow.

Protip: When you post a tag, do it _in the post_ and not just in your sig space.

this is really good i like it alot5/5 man for sure i like your border size