(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I think this is a sick sig i made, i think it had a nice outcome and everything

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V2
Brighter:
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V3
V&O Edition:
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CnC please, what do u think? any advice, tips?

version 2 is the best i think very good

ya thats the one i liked the best also, the VO edition lol, any tips to change or something u dont like about it? willing to make like 50 versions lol

its pretty good. all i can say is mix it up a bit with ur text and try and keep it closer to the focal but not too close that it draws attention from your render 3.5/5

thanks and i think the text is not to far away from the focal

I like what you've done, but the render looks weird, kind of gives me the floating head(mask) feeling. I like v3. You should try a b&w gradient and set it to multiply or luminosity. It's a decent sig 3/5.

v3 is the best, but it needs some work. For one, the colors are too intense, I'd suggest toning them down somewhat. Black/White gradient map set to Normal at about 20% opacity should do the trick.

And turn the text so it's not going against the flow.

it does have a b&w gradient map set to luminosity and ya i should put the colors bit down