Personally id prefer the colours to be clipping masked on the text then a black bg, but thats my taste :p. But yea i agree with Dyn it needs a border. Otherwise i dont see any problem with it
Hmm V2's the best imo, however id make the text bigger and put it at an angle, maybe the text going over the edge of the canvas slightly, so u cant see it all. Just play around a bit but V2's best so far imo
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