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Why have you posted this here? This is a place where you sell stuff to do with Youtube.

PM a mod they'll move it for you

Come up with a better idea than an entire game commentary. The idea is boring and overused, no one wants to sit and watch you play and ramble for 8 minutes.

Plus, you also have the game at full volume alongside your voice, which makes it hard to hear sometimes. The video also seemed to lag a little bit.