its good but i would try n mix up the shots abit e.g. quickscopes and try and get killfeeds , also try not to put the same clip in 2 times and sync the shots to the music if you can, a good edit can make any clip look good while a bad edit on great clips will still make it look bad.
another suggestion is take out the close range no scopes as there pretty simple and maybe do different effects for the mood of the song instead of having glow on constantly.