(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Hey guys! I finally got to upload my first commentary! I had to do Zombies because PSN is down

Anyway, please comment here or on the video with something you liked and something I should improve. It would mean a lot!

Thank you!!!

It was better than my first commentary. Good job :y:.

1. You might want to turn down your game volume lower then your voice over. ( -23 if using Vegas )
2. You seem to have a lot of background sound ( like bumping and stuff ) not sure what that is. Maybe get a new mic if your serious about commentary
3. Instead of saying "Umm" just pause.
4. Make a list of thing your going to talk about before so you don't have a dull spot.
5. Also, try talking louder, it hard to hear what your are saying.
6. Remember its okay to redo it a few times if you don't think its good. No one is perfect
Hope this helps

Thank you!!

Good job bro Very nice commentary

You have to talk a little louder

you need a better mic but good job