1. Its really good gameplay.
2. The Song only matched on some parts.
3. IT was too Dark (Black N White)
4. It would be better if in some parts we could hear the game. (Shots, Getting Killstreak) It would bring more excitement to the video
5. No personal this is just Helping.
i agree with aidz; maybe if you had people's reaction to the kills, perhaps a final killcam, thats always effective.
also, i really like the final snippet , i think montages should have more of that