dude the 1st one your just running. i think you should download these , edit them , and upload them. even if its not hd. lol . thats what i do . but yea my critism is you need to edit. the first vid is 24 seconds and your running for 16 seconds or so. here check mines out and let me know what you think. this is my 4th try , my 1st ones are on my channel. i just finished getting the intro . oh shit i just saw the third vid. nice snipping homie!