Few things: This is supposed to be constructive crtitisim , I'm not trying to flame you.
1) Try and sync some shots with music
2) Fast streaks , no one really wants to see someone run around like mad
3) Trip and Multi Kills keep attention
4) If you gonna use automatics you should be "hogging the feed"
5) The sound of the game with the sound of the music combined is KEY, if there is no game sound effects its a lot less entertaining.
6) Quick Scopes, sorry to say it, and I'm one of them 2, but that's the main thing people wanna see, sniping, specifically quick scoping, trick shots , collats and Redonculous range no scopes .
7) Never give up and keep workin on it.
You should check out my vids, my first one is soooo trash (this vid of yours is WAY better) and then watch my newest... Such a difference.
If I can help at all just send me a message.
~nut