ok im no montage expert but im going to be a critic, people dont like to see you run around they just like watching the kills so you should fast motion through the running part to the kill other than that nice job
The quick scope at 17 seconds was really sick, and that was a pretty nice multi kill with the predator. I really liked the song choice, and thought that you had a lot of great kills. (Especially with the ACOG, I never get how anyone can use that.) The only thing you could've done better with was the editing. When you went from clip to clip you should've made some transitions.