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[ame=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AjKBdoXsJSE]YouTube - Editing test[/ame]

i would say, you hadn't enough effects... the end is a bit boring...

Can you be more specific? What was boring? Gameplay? Editing? And what else does it need?

mhh gameplay is ok... but at the end it's only, there is no effect, you have a collateral headshot... can't you make it, that it looks more special...
sorry i don't have so murch words... I am from germany