Post: MW2 poem
01-05-2010, 05:48 PM #1
Otaku Buster
Cake is a lie
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I had to write a poem for school so I figured I'd write one about MW!
Lol, so I wrote one about snipers.

    The Reaper

I am the reaper,
your life is within my hands.
Just a pull of the trigger,
and i'll make your head expand.

I creep through the shadows,
to conceal my identity.
If you ever see me,
i'll make you beg for serenity.

I'm just an illusion,
just a thought in your mind.
Until the time comes,
when your the next assigned.


Lemme know what you think.
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01-05-2010, 06:20 PM #2
I love it man! Keep it up!
01-05-2010, 06:22 PM #3
xI Jakk Ix
You talkin to me?
Nice, try to make it a bit longer.
01-05-2010, 06:24 PM #4
daddar
Can’t trickshot me!
loool its wkd!
Ur teachr must give u an A
01-05-2010, 06:46 PM #5
maddmaxx93
Can’t trickshot me!
Excellent! When I was in school (thats right between NES and PSone) you would've gotten an A. In todays politically correct, nobody loses, liberal, lesbian, vegetarian school system I am amazed you didn't end up in counciling. My friends daughter was recently suspended for offering to "slap the smile" (direct quote) off a girls face over Myspace. Message sent and received at home. When I was a kid as soon as the bus dropped you off the school was no longer involved. Anyways as I said, excellent poem. How about an update on the grade you earned with it.
01-05-2010, 07:13 PM #6
xMillar-
Are you high?
That's really good, there's definately talent there!
01-05-2010, 07:48 PM #7
Otaku Buster
Cake is a lie
Originally posted by maddmaxx93 View Post
Excellent! When I was in school (thats right between NES and PSone) you would've gotten an A. In todays politically correct, nobody loses, liberal, lesbian, vegetarian school system I am amazed you didn't end up in counciling. My friends daughter was recently suspended for offering to "slap the smile" (direct quote) off a girls face over Myspace. Message sent and received at home. When I was a kid as soon as the bus dropped you off the school was no longer involved. Anyways as I said, excellent poem. How about an update on the grade you earned with it.


Yeah I was a bit worried at first but I told my teacher it was about the Marines, because she knows I plan on joining them in the next year or two, so thats how I guess thats how I got out of that one lol ^^ and I got a B+ on it Happy
01-05-2010, 08:19 PM #8
iUniQuee
Treasure hunter
yer its reli good but i think maybe a bit longer Happy
01-05-2010, 08:24 PM #9
CheateR13
Climbing up the ladder
Originally posted by Buster View Post
Yeah I was a bit worried at first but I told my teacher it was about the Marines, because she knows I plan on joining them in the next year or two, so thats how I guess thats how I got out of that one lol ^^ and I got a B+ on it Happy


My brother joined the marines, not too long ago xD.. n nice poem!
01-05-2010, 08:49 PM #10
maddmaxx93
Can’t trickshot me!
I come from a family of Marines, you couldn't have made a better choice. Best of luck to you young man, and thanks in advance for your service.

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