(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); This is like my second commentary.. Tell me what you think! I just started im a real amateur so it'd be great if you could give me some feedback and share it with your friend. :y:

To help you with your future commentaries, try jotting down a list of everything you could talk about, and when you think you have a lot, pick 2-3 things you have the most knowledge in & you like talking about. Other than that this is a good commentary overall!

As for your comment about the quality of the commentary over the quality of the gameplay: It's about both of these. You want to produce a good commentary while having good gameplay. So record every game and if you have a game where you go beast that's a decent length long, then just go off of that one for your commentary.

i think you sir could be a good commentator! Nice.

What he said ^ - Up the volume a bit.
Also, add a little vocal variance. You're sounding sorta monotone-ish.

Thank you all, i LOVE to hear comments like this. I'm gonna take all these tips into consideration for my next video.