There were a few good shots in there i would say. I would try to get a few collateral doubles / triples in there and some more noscopes/quickscopes. The few noscopes that you had in there were sometimes up close. Try to get farther noscopes and try to get more than 1 kill before skipping/fastforwarding.
not the best montage u take 2 shots most the time and why was the grenade shown?
respect for at least having the b*lls to upload a video most people here wont be able to do better
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