Originally posted by Swayy
i dont want too put up oone thats 5 pages long ugh i will hold up
More of a summary than an essay to me. Anyways you made a mistake in your conclusion. It's a spelling error. Be aware of "there & their' , 'whether or weather' and such other words. Computer won't point those errors out.
Error:
"and world events weather negative or beneficial occur"
Weather? or whether ?.
I suck at writing English though, it was my weakest class in high school. Mainly because I dislike reading.