(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I'm doing some english tests. This is a mock exam that I will be graded on.
The title is "Is all the hard work worth it"
I have to write a story using that title.
I am willing to pay up to 50k vBux if it's good.
I'll rep+thank too which is 24rep.

If you can give me more details in it i'll pay more.
Thanks

It's alright I got one.
A man is forced to work in pig stables for an evil russian boss.
He is trying to save up the money to emigrate to see his wife and children.
Thanks to Antonio!

Well since everyone is pointlessly not helping, I'll try my best at it.

Keep in mind, I'm a Senior in High School, finished with English forever (unless I go to College), made Straight A's in English 12, and was AP (Advanced Proficiency/Placement) English 11.

Is all the Hard Work Really Worth it?
By Edge-1337
Next Gen. Productions

You always hear people say hard work pays off. Does it really pay off though? You could work hard all your life, but without proper investment and proper planning all that work will be for nothing. Working hard is actually a good thing. It builds character, helps you to develop self-esteem by taking pride in your work, and helps you to better understand the meaning of responsibility.

With working hard now, while all your friends party, you will be better set later in life, while they are working hard until the pass retirement. Proper investment while working hard can help to pay off too. Manage funds wisely. Don't practice wasteful spending, and practice proper saving. Only spend your earnings on the things you truly need. Working hard to build up retirement, saving's accounts, checking accounts, and various other things depending on your employer will help you later in life.

Working hard now will help you on your job to gain promotions and better jobs. Working hard is important everywhere, not just on the job. Working hard in school also pays off both in short term and long term. Short term you can make better grades, which will pay off later in the long term when you try to apply for college. It is better to have worked hard while in school, to make the good grades for college then to have slacked off and not done the best you could. You will have a better chance of getting accepted into the college of your choice if you work hard while in school, instead of following your friends and slacking off.

So is hard work really worth it? Yes it is, it's always worth it.


Enjoi. If you use this, please tell me, and FOR GOD's SAKE place it in MS word to check grammar. I KNOW for a fact that it's not correct due to no grammar checking here on the forums.

Nice, But dont use "you" in a paragraph. Stay 3rd person.

Not that hard to change "you" to "I"

I still dont like the use of "I." But, its your paper so, paying someone 50cents (if converted) will not get you an A. Do it yourself. Teachers can enter a good 1-2 sentences of a paper on special software, it will search EVERYTHING, it can even get past the login page. Well, atleast my school has that.

-Markla709

Night

Yes, I forgot about that. It's called Turn To It. They enter some lines of your paper into some software and it will bring it right to where you took the material from.

Being that is the case, just let me know when your finished, and I'll edit mine out. Then it's untraceable. There is always loop holes to shit.

k gud lol the teach wud be all like are you shure u didn't copy this off the net

lol people paying for hw just do it urself and learn