Post: Hi, my name is Jesse, and I'm a published author.
05-14-2010, 09:28 PM #1
eDeityy
NGU's Resident Author
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I had been working on a poem for quite a while, and eventually decided to submit it to a contest with the hopes of being published in their anthology. Today, I opened up my mailbox and saw this:

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Evidently I'm still in the "final" round, which means I'm competing with 9 other students for a #1 spot and some sort of prize. I think it's a $250 savings bond, but I could be wrong. Either way, cross your fingers.


The poem can be read here:

Originally posted by another user
Late at night, trapped in memories and longing,
reality fades to dust as fantasies unwind.
Fingertips oiled, though parched by the sun glide eloquently over
your enthusiastic lettering stained on wrinkled paper that once rested beneath your hand –
that hand that mine is so familiar with, that hand that ebbs in mine –
letters victimized by your heart and ink you wielded for translation:
the language of love, sold to words for only a fraction of its worth.
The dark is illuminated; longing disappears momentarily as lips perk up
from natural elation: memories…
Pictures are projected upon the ceiling as memories become images.
A child’s flipbook created in art class; Spielberg slaves over a lens:
even they could not create happiness like this.
Happiness beyond the norm, joy even angels are less fond of.
Auspicious thoughts run in a new direction;
panic ensues: a jewel burrowed in a stack of hay.
Those same callused hands desperately grope the dresser,
hastily pulling out a drawer, then another, and another..
Finally, my mind sets itself at ease:
anxiety vanishes as swiftly as candlelight is stifled by suffocation –
and there is another memory, a tangible picture.
Something real; your smile.


I just wanted to share. I think it's pretty cool.
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The following 6 users say thank you to eDeityy for this useful post:

Adkins, Jerry_, Omniplasma, Reaper, Samberg, vladieboi
05-14-2010, 09:30 PM #2
PrayForPlagues
The Black Key
Nice man Happy
05-14-2010, 09:33 PM #3
That's pretty great man, congratulations! It takes real talent to do shit like that. Hell, maybe we'll be hearing your name in the media in the future :p
05-14-2010, 09:34 PM #4
Well done mate stick in there, wishing you best of luck!
05-14-2010, 10:26 PM #5
Pricey91
Professor of trollology
Hi, my name is Joe, and I'm an Alcoholic...

Sorry I couldn't help myself Happy

Seriously though, good luck.
05-14-2010, 11:04 PM #6
Adkins
Banned
Congratulations!
05-15-2010, 12:47 AM #7
wack .

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RICHIE209
05-15-2010, 12:49 AM #8
Reaper
The Grim Reaper
That is very nice of you to share that with us.
05-15-2010, 12:50 AM #9
Naruto
Dark Knight
Hmm, very interesting lines there. Awesome
05-15-2010, 01:28 AM #10
Cpt.Slow
Samurai Poster
Well done!

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