Too monotone and boring. He used like sentences from other rap songs and just compiled them into one, and made them sound worse. Chorus is about as dull and repetitive as can be.
This ones better, its my friend rapping and sounds similar to the one you posted:
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aEdwu3XNhn0]YouTube - PEETA - REAL NIGGAS (FEAT. JOHN BATES)[/ame]