(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Alright so about two months i would say after joined this place, i wrote a story using the most kick-ass members at the time as character. It was mostly a way to get me thinking or a screenplay to write for my media class(got an A btw).It pretty much turn into a series for me and now I'm going to hopefully one day out sell twilight with it. Anyways apparently its not here anymore so i was like Fuk it I'll post it again to let the new members enjoy this part of my history and NGU's history (all characters are from the original and nothing has change except maybe words are spelled right and no matte how much some people want me to change some of the main characters, I will not and don't Bitch about how long it is either)...........enjoy


In 2014, during an economic down turn, a young man named Lionel Belithem rose to power in the country of North Korea after the mysterious death of Kim Jong-ill. He had a way with words, which made him loved by the people. He soon took over China through negotiations with the leader of the country. A month later he made an alliance with Russia, Iraq, and Iran.
With this new found power he launched an attack upon Germany, and the rest of the Middle East. With the threat growing more severe, the U.S, along with Canada, Mexico, and other super powers planned an assault against him. Rather than start a war with other countries, he soon put a special military task force together, which he called the Ghosts. They were trained in every combat style there was and given nano suits. The suits made the person stronger and faster. He sent the task force to kill the leaders of Britain, France, and Turkey and soon invaded the now leaderless countries.

Knowing the rest of the world would attack back, Lionel sends the ghost to capture the leaders of the nations that did not stand with him. He demanded them to sign a treaty which would hand all power to him or he would blow up major cities with hydrogen bombs planted in the cities by the ghost and hang them. Not wanting millions of death on their hands; they signed the treaty, forever launching the world in an endless war. After which he broadcast them on television to tell the world what they did. Once they did he ordered them to be killed then and there, which they were in front of millions. An hour later five of the fifteen of the bombs went off.

Once all was said and done, he forces everyone out of political office and sets up his own government with him as the absolute ruler his new country, which he calls Zorta. During the first meeting with his allied countries, he betrays his comrades by having them all shot while discussing plans of the future, along with their men, taking over there countries. He soon controls half of the world with the rest banding together just to survive. He begins taxing highly on the middle class, with all the money going towards the war. He calls his new government Grand Telos. Soon a world police force is established, along with the grand army of the Telos Regime.

10 years have passed since Lionel Came into power. A man with light skin, dark hair in a general’s armor that’s been slightly altered is sitting down at a bar drinking. He looks forward with a blank face and just sips his drink. The Bartender is busy cleaning the counter while two guys next to him talk about how hard it is to work in construction. An Arm wrestling competition is taking place behind him, which he doesn’t care too much about, seeing how, he knows he could beat them all easily.

Soon the bartender comes towards the man in the general’s armor.
“Haven’t seen you around here before, you gotta name?” asked the bartender.
“People call me outsider.” The man replies. The bartender looks at him curiously; outsider doesn’t make eye contact with him and just looks down at his drink.
“We don’t get many people from the army in here.” The bartender says.
“I’m not part of the army anymore, I quit” says outsider.
“Oh yeah, so why did you quit?” asked the bartender. A huge explosion is heard as the whole bar starts to shake violently. The bartender ducks under his bar while some hop under nearby tables and try to head for the exit. Outsider however remains calm as he sits and holds his glass. A minute passes when the shaking stops. Confusion comes over everyone. Everyone starts to talk about what just happened and could have caused it. The bartender peaks his head from under the counter with his eyes wide and a surprise expression on his face. Outsider then says,
”I just blew up one of their buildings, that is why I quit”. He gets up, puts money on the counter and leaves out the door.

Outsider walks down the street while people are running in fright. He looks up and sees the building that he just blew up wondering how long it would take them to realize it was him who did it. As he wonders this, twelve peace troopers come and surround him.
“Guess not that long.” Outsider thinks.
“We have orders to take you into custody, do not resist or we will use force.” One of the troopers says.
“Is that so? Well then, I like to see you try.” Outsider replies. One of the troopers moves to put Outsider under arrest. When he’s just about to put the cuffs on him, Outsider grabs the cuffs, swings behind him and starts to choke him with the cuffs. The troopers all point their guns at him.
“How I love a challenge.” Outsider says under his breath.
Outsider pulls out the trooper gun with his free hand and shoots three of the troopers behind him, while using the trooper he has as a shield. Two men move to the right side of him while three move to the left of him.

“Let him go and come with us or we will use force.” One of the troopers demanded.
“I don’t think so.” Outsider says softly. He breaks the neck of the trooper he was using as a shield and lunges at one of the troopers on his right grabs the gun to deflect the gun fire away from him which manages to hit one of the troopers. He then grabs a knife from the trooper and stabs him with it; he gets the gun and shoots another trooper while he stabs one on his side. He looks up at the remaining four. All are pointing their guns at him.
“Now you di……” But just about when the trooper was gonna say something, a knife hits him in the throat, he drops dead. The troopers look around to see if anyone is around.
Outsider stands they’re a little confuse but focus. A figure soon appears from the darkness He’s dress in a black armor chest protector and green camo pants and a orange hood blocking his face. He moves closer holding a sword on his shoulder. The troopers order him to freeze; he does not stop and moves closer.
They give a warning that if he keeps moving, they will open fire. All he does is keep walking towards them. One of the troopers orders them to fire. They fire upon him; the man uses his sword to block the bullets from hitting him. The troopers seize fire.
“How could he block gun fire?” says one of the troopers, amazed.
“Coltz is just one crazy fool.” Outsider replies realizing who it is.
Coltz charges towards them, blocking their gun fire with his sword, He chops down one of the troopers with his sword at the same time pulling out his gun and shoots another trooper down. The last trooper alive goes down on his knees and begins to beg them to spare his life. Outsider picks him up and whisper to him in his ear and lets him go.
He soon runs off into the darkness leaving behind his weapon and fallen comrades. Coltz pulls off his hood revealing a man with blond short hair and blue eyes
“So what did you tell him?” asked Coltz.
“Told him your gay.” Outsider remarks.
“So that’s how you treat the person that saved your life huh. Well that’s the last time I do that for you.” Replies Coltz.
“idn’t you say that during the mission in South Africa?” Replies Outsider. Coltz pauses for a second as he looks at outsider’s grin. “Yeah well, you still owe me money.” Coltz replied
“So what are doing here?” asked Outsider.
“Some troopers came by my place asking about where you could be, I asked them why they would want to know and they said you went rogue on them. First I told them I had no clue where the hell you were but they demanded to search my home.” Coltz says.
“Then what happened?” asked Outsider.
“Oh I killed them. Shot them when they were in the kitchen, gonna be a bitch to clean up when I get home, well I guess I can’t go home now, but yeah anyway I grabbed my gun and sword threw on my suit and came looking for you, that’s when I saw the building go boom. I realize only you would do something like that, I also know that you like to see plans fall through which meant you would be close to where the big boom happened, looks like I was right.” Coltz Replied.
Coltz and outsider look towards at the burning building; civilians can be heard clamoring over what just happened.

“Looks like your gonna need my help to get everything back to it once was.” Coltz says.
“You know if you help me, you’ll be hunted down and branded as a traitor.” Outsider says.
Coltz looks at the burning building alongside Outsider, He then turns to him and says, “I’ll help you anyway, but we can’t do this on our own, were gonna need some help if were gonna do this.”
“You got anyone in mind?” Outsider asks. Coltz then smiles and says;”I might know a few.” Coltz and Outsider soon start to walk away into an alley; just as they do, the burning building soon collapse, sending a cloud of dust over a mile wide area.

Part two gets better I swear....but only if you want me to post it

Part 2.....

The world is at war....World War III begins.....Australia comes in and is owning everyone, they weren't called soldiers, more likely GaiaBlades, why? Well they're fast, and that it. Some countries got jealous so they sent in some hacker to hack the Australian system to make the GaiaBlades weak, the war was lost.

1 year later, a guy named Mr. Gaia, approached the room where all the presidents meet, Mr. Gaia slapped their face.....that was when World War IV began, but it was all the countries vs Mr. Gaia, Mr. Gaia had his killstreak all set, his safe house was flanked, just when he thought he was dead, Chuck Norris killed everyone and got a head shot without a gun....Chuck Norris unlocked the Tactical Nuke but Outsider was like "ZOMG HACKZ" so he banned Chuck Norris, but Chuck Norris never really got banned, you know why .

Mr. Gaia won the battle for Australia

This isn't really part of the part but I just decided to make it up , if you feel like you don't like me posting my story, then don't hesitate to tell me, I'll take it down.

"I might have a few!"

hmmmmmm :p

What's eXo?



good story though :p

PART TWO p|0x <3

Wtf is eXo?

I believe eXo was Outsider's glitching thing. Did it not originate form Outsiders first site exohacks or something along those lines.

yeah its did, eXo as the best of the best and now there aremany clan eXo's buuuut none of them are related to outsider so there gay.

Good story, You have talent.

I love the posts that were excited that they read the WHOLE thing.

They have no idea of the time to write the whole thing.

The best result of your efforts would be if you could get some membership interested in reading.
If you put it out in segments like this, it could catch on.

Lol I know what eXo is. I was trollin