Post: eXo: An untold story Part 2
11-18-2010, 08:37 PM #1
Cobra-D
Smells Like Teen Spirit
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An hour later Coltz and Outsider Reach a bar named the lucky 7 located in downtown of what use to be Tampa, Florida before being renamed Zithora, New France. Smoke fills the air of the bar from cigarettes and cigars. The bar is filled with low lives and wannabe criminals. The bartender is busy handing out drinks while a few are playing a game of pool.

“So who are we looking for?” asked Outsider.
“Um a guy named Matt, he use to be a part of an elite task force, we even worked with him once, he quit about a year ago cause it got boring for him apparently, and I heard he likes to hang around here.” Coltz says. Coltz looks around to see if he can spot him while Outsider is trying to hold his breath from the awful smell within the bar.

“Well hurry and find him, I don’t know how much longer I can stand the smell in here.” Outsider says as he looks at his left to see a guy at a table smoking a cigar, he asked him politely to put it out or at least blow it in a different direction.
The guy looks at him for a second, and then he inhales and blows directly in Outsiders face. Outsider gives him a dirty look before moving on. At the counter, Three men can be seen, one is dress in trench coat enjoying his drink and seems to be paying no attention to what’s going on around him. Another one can be seen hitting on the female bartender. The last guy who with a dark face and short black hair, wearing a black and white striped suit with 3 pockets on the side. With a gun holster on his left side and a hunting knife on his right, can be seen talking to the bartender, he soon turns around and notices Outsider and Coltz.
He takes one last sip of his drink, gets up and walks towards Coltz and Outsider.

“Allow me to introduce myself; people call me Lasthope or Hope for short.” Lasthope says. “Yeah, what do you want?” Outsider asks not really caring.
“Well you see my friend plays poo…”
“I don’t play pool.” Outsider Interrupts.
“Well that’s great because my friend there sucks.” Lasthope says pointing at a big guy in a modify peace trooper suit painted black with green banners hanging on the side and an elite solders helmet fitted with a breathing apparatus.
“Son of a bitch, he’s trying to hustle us.” Coltz says.
“How do you know?” asked Outsider.
“Cause that’s the guy were looking for, that’s Matt.” Coltz says. Coltz heads over to him.

“Wait why do you need Matt for?” asked Lasthope. “That’s none of your concern.” Replies Outsider.
He then pushes Lasthope out of the way and follows Coltz. Matt is busy playing pool when Coltz comes up to him and asked, “Matt can I talk to you for a minute, it’s important.”
Matt replies, “Just give me one sec.” Matt then takes aim and shoot, and sinks three cue balls and wins the game.
“That’ll be 100 bucks, pay up.” Matt tells the guy he just beat. Matt collects his money and turns around to talk to Coltz where he then spots Outsider who he recognizes. “Outsider, I haven’t seen you since our squad did operation Diego two years ago. Staying out trouble I hope.” Matt says.
“I wouldn’t say that, I mean he did just blow up a building.” Coltz says.

“Whoa that was you, dam people have been freaking out about that. Nice” remarks Lasthope who just caught up with them.
“So what do you guys want?” asked Matt. “Were putting together a team to bring down Lionel and his hold on the world and need your help.” Replies Outsider.
“We can’t do it on our own, well we probably could but it would be easier and faster if we had help. So will you do it, will you help us?” Coltz asks.

“Course we’ll help you, nothings more fun then bringing down an evil dictator who’s ruining the world now is there.” Lasthope says with a smile as he puts his arms around both outsider and Coltz who seems to be a little annoyed by him.
“I don’t know, I’ll have to see. Don’t really feel like taking down anyone.” Matt Says.

“Ah c’mon Matt, it’ll be fun kicking some dictators ass.” Lasthope says. Just then, two men enter the bar, one wearing a black shirt and the other wearing a blue shirt with Bob Marley on it. The one in the black shirt has a scar on his left cheek while the one in the blue is wearing sunglasses with a missing tooth.

“Hey! You two cheated me out of our money! Say’s the guy with the scar. They both pull out their guns and aim it at both Lasthope and Matt.
“Ah crap not again.” Lasthope says. The two guys move closer to where Lasthope, Outsider, Coltz, and Matt are. Outsider moves in front of the guy with the scar and says, “Look, I’m gonna have to ask you guys if you could just drop whatever beef you have against them before I end up hurting you two”. The guy Outsider is standing in front of looks at him with no plan of moving an inch.
“Well you know what; I say you better get the hell out of my way before I give you a beating you will never forget.” The guy says. He proceeds to move around Outsider but is stopped by him. Outsider then says, “I’m afraid I can’t let you.” The guy smiles briefly before taking a swing at Outsider, Outsider however is able to stop the punch with his hand and punches him in the stomach causing him to drop his gun. He then gives him a left hook, causing him to fall backwards on to a table.

The guy with the missing tooth points his gun at outsider but before he can get a shot out, Lasthope stabs him in the arm causing him to scream in pain. While trying to escape he bumps into a huge biker. The biker pushes him into a table where two thugs happen to be sitting at. One of the thugs gets up, walks to the biker and punches him. The biker’s friends see’s this and jump to defend him.
Soon a bar fight breaks out. One of the thug tries to hit Matt with a pool stick but Matt catches the stick and breaks it in half, he then kicks him in the face knocking him out. A guy grabs Coltz from behind, Coltz steps on his foot and bites his hand. He soon lets go of his hand. Coltz then turns around and kicks him on the side of his head. Lasthope goes and gets his knife from the guy he stabbed in the arm. When he does this, a guy with an eye patch attacks him. He pins Lasthope on the floor while trying to stab him with a kitchen knife.

Lasthope with one hand keeps the knife from plunging into him, and with the other hand he squeezes his arm where his muscle meets the bone causing the guy to scream in pain. The guy with the eye patch soon lets go of Lasthope. When he does Lasthope grabs his knife and plunges it into the guy remaining eye, blinding him forever.
Suddenly, a loud bang is heard and everyone stops fighting.
The noise turns out to be a shotgun fired by the bartender.
“Alright that’s it!” The bartender shouts out. “There will be no more fighting in here tonight, now all of ya beat it, were closed for the night.”

Everyone starts heading towards the door; some walk while others limp. “As for you four” The bartender says to Outsider, Coltz, Lasthope, and Matt, while pointing his shotgun at them.
“I never wanna see you four in this bar ever again! Now get before I shoot you where you stand!” yelled the bartender. The four head out of the bar not wanting to get shot at where they stand.
Soon the four of them are outside of the bar.
“Man I can’t believe we got kicked out of another bar.” Lasthope says disappointed.
“Well seeing how we’re kicked out of every bar, I guess we could help you out now.” Matt says.
“Really, alright then, let’s go and see if we can’t get anyone else to help us out.” Coltz says.
“Umm who else do we know that could help us?” asked Outsider. Lasthope thinks for a minute before looking at Matt and says, “Elfmotat!”
“Well he has been dying to destroy Grand Telos for years now. I also know where that son of a bitch is hanging out.” Matt says.
Everyone starts walking away until Coltz realizes Outsider isn’t behind him. Outsider is standing looking at the guy who blew smoke in his face earlier.
“Yo outsider, are you coming?” Coltz asks.

“Yeah just give me a sec.” Outsider replies. He walks over to the man who is standing against a wall enjoying his cigar. He sees Outsider and asks, “Yeah and what the hell you want bitch?” Outsider grabs him by the collar of his shirt and forces his cigar into his mouth and down his throat. As he begins to choke, outsider tells him, “smoking can be bad for your health, I would quit if I were you.” He hits him hard in the stomach, which causes him to cough out the cigar. He walks away leaving the man on the ground coughing up the remainder of his cigar.

An hour later, the four of them are on their way to where Elfmotat is hanging out. Drones are seen flying by while Peace troopers are all around.
“Maybe it’s just me but you guys really think it’s a good idea walking around with a guy who just blew up a building?” Lasthope asks.
Awesome faceon’t forget he also killed hmm eight Peace troopers, oh and participated in a bar fight.” Coltz adds.
“This day just keeps getting better.” Lasthope remarks sarcastically. As they continue to walk several Peace troopers turn and start to look at the group suspiciously. They keep moving as they try to ignore the peace troopers around them.
Some troopers start to follow them from behind, making sure they keep their distance from the group. The group soon comes to an alley. Even though the alley is not the way to where Elfmotat is, they decide to turn into it. As they keep walking, troopers follow behind.

“I really don’t feel like running right now.” Lasthope says under his breath. Soon they take off. The peace troopers start running after them. As the group heads for the end of the alley, three triangle shaped drones with round edges and two circulating blades on the outside for balance, flight, and movement drop down in front of them. The group soon stops at the site of the drones. The sides of the drones open up revealing mini gun turrets. The peace troopers behind are just a few feet away.
“You think you can stop their gun fire Coltz?” asked Outsider.
“Possibly but it’ll be hard.” Coltz replies.
“Yeah that’s nice.” Matt remarks.

Matt moves towards the two drones. One of the drones orders Matt to surrender or they will open fire on him. From behind, the troopers are right behind them. Suddenly, Matt grabs both drones by the barrels of their turrets. The drones start firing wildly in all direction, the group duck down to avoid the gun fire. Matt, still holding the barrels smashes the drones into each other. The rest of the team gets up quickly and start running, amazed at what Matt just did. Matt suit is covered with bullet holes with no sign of injuries; his left shoulder however soon starts to bleed, along with his left hand.
Awesome faceidn’t that hurt?” Coltz says. “Pain is just a state of mind” Matt replies

They head down a block and down another alley and back onto a street. Sirens are heard coming towards the group. A light from above centers on them, the group looks up and discovers that the light is coming from a helicopter. Ten peace troopers lower down from two helicopters in front of the team. The group charge toward the troopers. Lasthope pulls out his knife and stabs one of the troopers. Matt Pulls out both his pistols, he throws one to Outsider. They both take aim at a trooper and shoot them down. Coltz while blocking the shots, ignore the troopers and grabs hold of one of the lines that a trooper just repelled down and starts to climb up.
A trooper soon spots Coltz, before he can get a shot off Matt grabs his gun from him and hits him hard with it. Lasthope engages in a hand to hand battle with one of the troopers. Another trooper grabs Lasthope from behind, as the trooper moves in to deal a powerful blow to Lasthope, Lasthope drops to the floor. He then flips the trooper holding him over his back. Lasthope pulls out his gun and shoots the trooper standing. Matt and outsider take care of the remaining troopers.

Coltz manages to get inside the helicopter. The pilot pulls out his gun but Coltz knocks it out of his hand before he can aim it and then knocks him out. Coltz turn the helicopter around and shoots out the other chopper and lowers the helicopter so the rest of the group can get in. with the team inside, Coltz takes off towards their destination.
“Since when do you know how to fly?” Outsider asks.
“Forgot, now shut up and hold on.” Coltz replies. Two helicopters appear and begin to pursue them. Coltz tries to lose them but can’t seem to shake them.
“Okay, this is getting boring. I have to lose these bitches before more show up. Everyone hold on. This is gonna hurt.” Coltz says. Coltz starts to descend with the other choppers start to shoot. Just ahead of the team are two buildings with an opening not big enough for a chopper to fly through.
“You might want to start pulling up right about now” Outsider says.
“That’s why I said it’s gonna hurt.” Coltz Replies somewhat nervous.
Coltz flies toward the narrow opening of the two buildings. The propellers of the choppers break off while the rest of the chopper glides for awhile before falling and crashing into a wall. The other two choppers avoid the buildings and fly off into the distance. Coltz kicks down the side door of the crashed chopper. The rest exit the crashed helicopter, all battered and bruise.
“Yeah next time try not to kill us.” Lasthope says while rubbing his neck.
Coltz simply smerks.

Part 3 anyone??????
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11-19-2010, 08:27 AM #11
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Loving the series so far Winky Winky cant wait for a part three!!!! Great work!

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