Post: Do you like my rap ?
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03-10-2011, 11:36 PM
#1
Tornabeneee
Haxor!
yo got the gotti in my hand patron in my cup kush in my lungs and i dont give a f**k. i fly away and dont come down for a couple of days ya blowin trees sour d's ben doin this shit since 13 . put the weed in the swisher roll it up light it and the shit hits you like a f*****n twister. i swear when i spit with a flow ill come at your door with the 44 tear ya spot up . this is everyday life no gimics no replays make one mistake and you could get ya s**t blown away.
everyone whos read these like them, and thos are the first 2 raps i ever rote, dont flame too hard lol !!
03-11-2011, 12:42 AM
#2
Nightm4rPhantom
1337 Player
03-11-2011, 12:44 AM
#3
xScreamo!
Trading Kids For Angel Dust
Originally posted by Tornabeneee
Look I Dominate to Pentrate and Infiltrate your Mental state and Cross wires like an Interstate While skill I Demonstrate i decide your f****n fate play with me and watch your f*****n back shades on hat back gat black(POW) blow ya s*it up , (NUKE) ha you was laughin before but yous dead now survival of the fittest only i survived now im not playin with yall but i did trip and fall but still made it to the top so now im here to show the skills i have and everyday i thank god and my boys who inspired me to right (thanks moe)
yo got the gotti in my hand patron in my cup kush in my lungs and i dont give a f**k. i fly away and dont come down for a couple of days ya blowin trees sour d's ben doin this shit since 13 . put the weed in the swisher roll it up light it and the shit hits you like a f*****n twister. i swear when i spit with a flow ill come at your door with the 44 tear ya spot up . this is everyday life no gimics no replays make one mistake and you could get ya s**t blown away.
everyone whos read these like them, and thos are the first 2 raps i ever rote, dont flame too hard lol !!
yo got the gotti in my hand patron in my cup kush in my lungs and i dont give a f**k. i fly away and dont come down for a couple of days ya blowin trees sour d's ben doin this shit since 13 . put the weed in the swisher roll it up light it and the shit hits you like a f*****n twister. i swear when i spit with a flow ill come at your door with the 44 tear ya spot up . this is everyday life no gimics no replays make one mistake and you could get ya s**t blown away.
everyone whos read these like them, and thos are the first 2 raps i ever rote, dont flame too hard lol !!
Could you make a video of your rap?
03-11-2011, 07:10 PM
#5
Tornabeneee
Haxor!
Originally posted by xScreamoV2
Could you make a video of your rap?
a video lol no not yet i just started to rap about a week ago a voice recording yes i will do !
---------- Post added at 02:10 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:09 PM ----------
Originally posted by Nightm4rPhantom
Ahah Im not going to try to flame but you could of made it a bit neater otherwise good use of vocabulary and good lines lol
lol thank you : )
03-11-2011, 07:31 PM
#6
Shotz Fired
Glock Work Orange
Originally posted by Tornabeneee
Look I Dominate to Pentrate and Infiltrate your Mental state and Cross wires like an Interstate While skill I Demonstrate i decide your f****n fate play with me and watch your f*****n back shades on hat back gat black(POW) blow ya s*it up , (NUKE) ha you was laughin before but yous dead now survival of the fittest only i survived now im not playin with yall but i did trip and fall but still made it to the top so now im here to show the skills i have and everyday i thank god and my boys who inspired me to right (thanks moe)
yo got the gotti in my hand patron in my cup kush in my lungs and i dont give a f**k. i fly away and dont come down for a couple of days ya blowin trees sour d's ben doin this shit since 13 . put the weed in the swisher roll it up light it and the shit hits you like a f*****n twister. i swear when i spit with a flow ill come at your door with the 44 tear ya spot up . this is everyday life no gimics no replays make one mistake and you could get ya s**t blown away.
everyone whos read these like them, and thos are the first 2 raps i ever rote, dont flame too hard lol !!
yo got the gotti in my hand patron in my cup kush in my lungs and i dont give a f**k. i fly away and dont come down for a couple of days ya blowin trees sour d's ben doin this shit since 13 . put the weed in the swisher roll it up light it and the shit hits you like a f*****n twister. i swear when i spit with a flow ill come at your door with the 44 tear ya spot up . this is everyday life no gimics no replays make one mistake and you could get ya s**t blown away.
everyone whos read these like them, and thos are the first 2 raps i ever rote, dont flame too hard lol !!
Pretty good dude def dont spit singles they sound brutal and here is my rap
Dont make me get the black gloves and black ski mask
My gat clap thats what happens when you see me blast
And i get fat stacks of that cheese fast
Place your bets this aint no black jack free pass
It took me near the cake flippin
To become rookie of the year like blake griffin
If i sock ya you see the ground first
If not i pop ya with my 3 round burst
My ammo full for that thing to pop
Aim down the sight and pull like a sling shot
You aint no magician i see the dirty tricks
Bust open your door with my G36
With this glock i beam and standfirm
And put you on the spot like green lantern
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03-11-2011, 07:36 PM
#7
Tornabeneee
Haxor!
Originally posted by Shotz
Pretty good dude def dont spit singles they sound brutal and here is my rap
Dont make me get the black gloves and black ski mask
My gat clap thats what happens when you see me blast
And i get fat stacks of that cheese fast
Place your bets this aint no black jack free pass
It took me near the cake flippin
To become rookie of the year like blake griffin
If i sock ya you see the ground first
If not i pop ya with my 3 round burst
My ammo full for that thing to pop
Aim down the sight and pull like a sling shot
You aint no magician i see the dirty tricks
Bust open your door with my G36
With this glock i beam and standfirm
And put you on the spot like green lantern
Dont make me get the black gloves and black ski mask
My gat clap thats what happens when you see me blast
And i get fat stacks of that cheese fast
Place your bets this aint no black jack free pass
It took me near the cake flippin
To become rookie of the year like blake griffin
If i sock ya you see the ground first
If not i pop ya with my 3 round burst
My ammo full for that thing to pop
Aim down the sight and pull like a sling shot
You aint no magician i see the dirty tricks
Bust open your door with my G36
With this glock i beam and standfirm
And put you on the spot like green lantern
that was good that was good !!
03-11-2011, 07:50 PM
#8
Shotz Fired
Glock Work Orange
03-11-2011, 08:33 PM
#10
Tornabeneee
Haxor!
im just lettin everybody know i just started this rap shit and im gonna finish it ahahaaaa , yo never cared what a hater hadda say till this day i be on my crazy flow steal ya girl **** her for a hour make the bitch sour send her back to you like i know nothin bout her(HAHA) then its on to the next one like chris brown and rihanna and i swear i kill this flow like a murderer killed his councler
6 foot 7 foot : )
6 foot 7 foot : )
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