Post: Do you like my rap ?
03-10-2011, 11:36 PM #1
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yo got the gotti in my hand patron in my cup kush in my lungs and i dont give a f**k. i fly away and dont come down for a couple of days ya blowin trees sour d's ben doin this shit since 13 . put the weed in the swisher roll it up light it and the shit hits you like a f*****n twister. i swear when i spit with a flow ill come at your door with the 44 tear ya spot up . this is everyday life no gimics no replays make one mistake and you could get ya s**t blown away.


everyone whos read these like them, and thos are the first 2 raps i ever rote, dont flame too hard lol !!
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03-12-2011, 09:40 AM #11
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Lol Rap Wars .. kinda Cool
03-13-2011, 09:47 PM #12
Shotz Fired
Glock Work Orange
Originally posted by Tornabeneee View Post
im just lettin everybody know i just started this rap shit and im gonna finish it ahahaaaa , yo never cared what a hater hadda say till this day i be on my crazy flow steal ya girl **** her for a hour make the bitch sour send her back to you like i know nothin bout her(HAHA) then its on to the next one like chris brown and rihanna and i swear i kill this flow like a murderer killed his councler
6 foot 7 foot : )


When you runnin and screaming
Im gunnin and beamin
And i aint no fake chump like rick ross
but for the sake i might dump like six shots
and il take the guns and it goes thump when i rip glocks
Im workin on rhymes while you singin in the attic
im jerkin the nines and im bringin the static
I move keys like im vallet parkin
and im the truth please il make your pal pay for narkin
I shoot pos and come spraying like here we go
and i move os like kids playing with cherios
your crew knows but they sayin the dont fear me though
03-13-2011, 10:01 PM #13
Scarface
C.R.E.A.M.
Nice Rap, damn I wrote a few bars last year but I lost them :(
03-13-2011, 10:56 PM #14
Originally posted by carface View Post
Nice Rap, damn I wrote a few bars last year but I lost them :(

Thank you !! , keeeeep ya head up and right somthing new !!!

---------- Post added at 05:56 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:56 PM ----------

Originally posted by Shotz
When you runnin and screaming
Im gunnin and beamin
And i aint no fake chump like rick ross
but for the sake i might dump like six shots
and il take the guns and it goes thump when i rip glocks
Im workin on rhymes while you singin in the attic
im jerkin the nines and im bringin the static
I move keys like im vallet parkin
and im the truth please il make your pal pay for narkin
I shoot pos and come spraying like here we go
and i move os like kids playing with cherios
your crew knows but they sayin the dont fear me though



your raps are reallllly goood !
03-13-2011, 11:18 PM #15
Shotz Fired
Glock Work Orange
Originally posted by Tornabeneee View Post
Thank you !! , keeeeep ya head up and right somthing new !!!

---------- Post added at 05:56 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:56 PM ----------




your raps are reallllly goood !


Thanks man so are yours since you just started spittin like a few days ago keep it up bro
03-13-2011, 11:34 PM #16
Originally posted by Shotz
Thanks man so are yours since you just started spittin like a few days ago keep it up bro


lol its been like a week and a half
03-15-2011, 05:39 PM #17
Originally posted by Shotz
Thanks man so are yours since you just started spittin like a few days ago keep it up bro

SHOTZ i gott somthinn new for you !

so ima pussy for standin up and mannin up to his punk ass , i swear i had enough of the bull shit you do , and im sick of you. your a wanna be nigga , mexican little wigga , if i got my hands on ya neck id give you the one hitta quitta. and your the bitch for not standin up and mannin up to a 5'5 ****in punk and as little as i am you looked kinda shook i could tell in ya eyes ya wanted to cry infront of every body but deep inside you knew youd look like a bitch so you sat there like a dog wishin i died.
03-15-2011, 07:31 PM #18
What are you guys talking about spittin everytime I spit saliva comes out of my mouth :P
03-15-2011, 07:57 PM #19
i think these guys are Dope listen
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