Post: What you think of my poems?
03-27-2011, 04:57 AM #1
AyeeLG
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(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Well i like writing poems soo i decided to share with the NGU community 2 of my poems. Feedback is appreciated. Smile

#1:
Love is like a battle field.
You dont know what to expect.
No ones there to help.
No ones there to protect.
A war zone is this place.
No smiles or warm embrace.
No shelter, no protection
but yet no hate no rejection.
No sadness or pain
best of all, no stupid little games.
No ones there to confuse.
No ones there to lose.
Nobody to face, in this battle field of a place.

#2:
Just thinking of our friendship,
puts a smile on my face.
Knowing all i need to make me happy,
is just your warm embrace.
I call you my best friend,
cause i know your always there for me.
You know so much more,
than anybody else can see.
You know when im lying,
just by looking in my eyes.
You see past the words,
that everyone else buys.
You are always here for me,
jus like i am for you.
You can make me feel better,
when im down and blue.
You are my best friend,
so wonderful and sweet.
You always seem to make,
my heart skip a beat.
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03-27-2011, 03:13 PM #11
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03-27-2011, 03:20 PM #12
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Nate
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Originally posted by lalo View Post
Well i like writing poems soo i decided to share with the NGU community 2 of my poems. Feedback is appreciated. Smile

#1:
Love is like a battle field.
You dont know what to expect.
No ones there to help.
No ones there to protect.
A war zone is this place.
No smiles or warm embrace.
No shelter, no protection
but yet no hate no rejection.
No sadness or pain
best of all, no stupid little games.
No ones there to confuse.
No ones there to lose.
Nobody to face, in this battle field of a place.

#2:
Just thinking of our friendship,
puts a smile on my face.
Knowing all i need to make me happy,
is just your warm embrace.
I call you my best friend,
cause i know your always there for me.
You know so much more,
than anybody else can see.
You know when im lying,
just by looking in my eyes.
You see past the words,
that everyone else buys.
You are always here for me,
jus like i am for you.
You can make me feel better,
when im down and blue.
You are my best friend,
so wonderful and sweet.
You always seem to make,
my heart skip a beat.


If these are truly your, then might I say, good job. You truly are a poet and you probably didn't even know it.(lulz)

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AyeeLG
03-27-2011, 03:40 PM #13
AyeeLG
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Originally posted by RoboCop View Post
If these are truly your, then might I say, good job. You truly are a poet and you probably didn't even know it.(lulz)


haha thanks man, ive been writing for quite some time now.

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