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05-13-2011, 04:14 PM
#1
NanuGama
YouTube.com/NanuGama
Originally posted by another user
God please help me
I'll do anything just to see you
I'm already down to my knees
Hoping for the best
Hoping to see my angel again
God, why must you torture me?
Why must you take the girl I love away?
I did nothing wrong
I was just strong
But without her, I'm weak
I'm a wound without anything to protect it
Will I have bleed to show how much I need her, Oh' great almighty one?
Will I have to scrape/dig out my heat with my finger nails and open it to show you all of it?
All of this love
All of this tears that I shed when you were gone
All of the happiness she brought into my life
Where before was nothing ... But, she created something
Something powerful
That nothing cannot break or destroy
A bond that will be living on for eternity
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05-14-2011, 08:16 PM
#21
Kombust
At least I can fight
Originally posted by NanuGama
Some passionate writing, have you got a blog or something? I really think you should set one up and show your work to the world. You never know where your skill can take you,
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05-17-2011, 01:52 AM
#24
NanuGama
YouTube.com/NanuGama
The 21st
o' May
Where we shall wipe our tears
And wait for forgiveness
Anticipate the doom the sinned have brought upon us
And not forgive
But I shall not care about tho' entering the great heavens or hell
Only to care for her
Only to be the light in her shadow
When everything is pitch black
Only to look into her eyes
While the sun destroys all we have loved and created
But nothing could destory the ways I feel
The way I feel for you
A beautiful girl ......
A beautiful girl that can make life worth it
Even while it's in the brink of destruction
So God and the Devil
Put youre decisons aside
And let me live my life
At least one more day
To cherish
And reminsence
All of this
To have one last moment with her
and to let her know
How greatful I am to be with her
How much I love her
and how lucky I am to meet such an amazing girl
Please God, Just one more day
Just one more day .....
o' May
Where we shall wipe our tears
And wait for forgiveness
Anticipate the doom the sinned have brought upon us
And not forgive
But I shall not care about tho' entering the great heavens or hell
Only to care for her
Only to be the light in her shadow
When everything is pitch black
Only to look into her eyes
While the sun destroys all we have loved and created
But nothing could destory the ways I feel
The way I feel for you
A beautiful girl ......
A beautiful girl that can make life worth it
Even while it's in the brink of destruction
So God and the Devil
Put youre decisons aside
And let me live my life
At least one more day
To cherish
And reminsence
All of this
To have one last moment with her
and to let her know
How greatful I am to be with her
How much I love her
and how lucky I am to meet such an amazing girl
Please God, Just one more day
Just one more day .....
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