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You do this when you're home alone?

Most people would take the time to whack one off

"But without her, I'm weak
I'm a wound without anything to protect it"

I like the analogy. :y: It's original, yet simple.

You're not bad at writing, not at all. I suggest you keep doing what you do, because there's always room for improvement.

It's a bit cliché, but it works.

I really like this . Well done. And I guess if you were home alone most people would take the time to whack one off

Thanks for the great comments.
I have a lot of more pieces.

You should definetly post more of these.

Here are my writting pieces.

#1 Outdid -

God please help me
I'll do anything just to see you
I'm already down to my knees
Hoping for the best
Hoping to see my angel again



God, why must you torture me?
Why must you take the girl I love away?
I did nothing wrong
I was just strong
But without her, I'm weak
I'm a wound without anything to protect it



Will I have bleed to show how much I need her, Oh' great almighty one?
Will I have to scrape/dig out my heat with my finger nails and open it to show you all of it?
All of this love
All of this tears that I shed when you were gone
All of the happiness she brought into my life

Where before was nothing ... But, she created something



Something powerful
That nothing cannot break or destroy
A bond that will be living on for eternity


#2 When you were gone, My mind stlil stayed on you -

Please dont leave
Accompany
Show me what you mean
I'll show you what you see in me
I'll provide him
You'll be the angel

Love life story completed
But will never end


I said, you said, I love you
Those three words
You brought huge impacts
Life cant be the same

Without it .....


What's the point of this
Of this writing
Of loving you
Of meeting you


#3 My Endless Wish -

Looking through old notes and poems
As I unfold them
I see a lot repetition
It means that what I desire shouldn't end
It should be there forever ..... Just like my wish ♥

#4 Able to speak? No, but able to love <3

Am I able to speak??
My heart is doing the talking
Words aren’t the enemy
But the beats are taking over

Trying to cry out your name
Trying to struggle with time
Everything seems incomplete

$5 - dsd

Bleed from the heart
Even thought it forms it
Cry from the soul
Even though it formed you


I know I wasn't told any of this
It wasn't planned
It was all in timing
But I feel all of this
All of this passion

If everything's a dream
I don't see a nightmare anytime soon
I see a reality
The real
The feels


#6 - [21]

When we walk to our homes tonight
I know my heart and I will have a fight
I'll miss being with my other half
I don't think time will past as fast
I'll miss looking your eyes and telling you how I fee
How I never want to leave you
How I need you in life
That if you were to disappear, I'll be miserable

Until the 21th hits, we shall thy meet again

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K. :jim::jim::jim:

dam that is crazuy