Post: Freddy's Epic Story [To Be Updated]
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05-24-2011, 08:07 AM
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Vegetᶏ
Freddy Krueger
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Alright As The Title Says, I'm Writing A Story For School, I've Decided To Make It About NGU People/Characters :lol:
So Basically It's About GOLAGODA And Drackos Going On An Adventure To Retrieve GOLA's E-Peen (E-Penis, Toned Down For School Lol) From The Infamous Trollface Of The Interwebz.
Along The Way The Two Young Adventurers Run Into Many Characters Such As ROCKY-Southpaw, A People Hatin' Cannable, Bulletzz The Young Seedling, HolyNoodleZ The Magical Wish Noodle And _Dream Spirit That Invades Dreams To Tell The Future...
When They Finally Reach The Trollface, There Is A Surprise Ending.
So Yeah That's My Basic Outline For The Story :lol:
[multipage= Wanna Be In The Story? CLOSED ]
If You Wanna Be In The Story, Ask Me, With A Description Of Yourself Or I'll Make It Up
Here's A List So Far:
ROCKY-Southpaw - A Cannable, People Hatin' Hobo
BuLLeTz - A Young Seedling
_Dream - A Dream Spirit That Tells The Future In Dreams
HolyNoodleZ - The Magical Noodle That Grants Your One Wish Horribly Wrong, You May Even Die...
Dopey - The All Powerful "Rep" King Of EnGeeYoo
DEREKTROTTER - The "Rep" Queen Of EnGeeYoo
GOLAGODA - A Young Boy Who Loves A Long E-Peen
Drackos - GOLA's Best Buddy, He Too Shares A Passion For Long E-Peens
mvieyra - King Dopey's Son
D3stRukxiOn - This Troubled Young Boy Bashes Any Who Stand In His Path
xxtaylorxx - A sweet little girl with a Carnivorous Stuffed Rabbit (It's alive, but only when she's not looking!)
Kane212 v2 - A Robot Who Loves To Smoke
Juzzy - Music God (Likes alot of genres but mainly listens to Post-Hardcore)
Outsider - God
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A long time ago, in the land of EnGeeYoo, a young boy called GOLAGODA was crying. His dashing young friend, Drackos, came up to him and enquired why he was crying .GOLAGODA replied by saying that someone took his E-Peen. Drackos responded by saying, “I think I know who took it.” GOLAGODA’s face lit up with a smile, “Take me to the person that took my E-Peen, I’ll report him to King Dopey, he’ll be dealt with severely.” A frown came upon Drackos’ face, “The journey will be difficult, we will be venturing through the land of Prems, we may come across many strange and dangerous beings.”
“I am ready for the journey Drackos, but tell me, who stole E-Peen?” GOLAGODA said, with a hint of accusation in his voice. Drackos responded in a “ :carling: ” tone, “ I think it was the infamous Trollface of the interwebz.”
GOLAGODA stood up and wiped his tear and snot filled face with his arm, “ Let’s go get him Drackos!” GOLAGODA shouted with pride. So at that the two young EnGeeYooians set off down the blue and white road, into the realm of Prems, where “Rep” King Dopey and his “rep” Queen DEREKTROTTER resided, along with many other beings had their existence.
Not long after setting down the blue and white road, did young Drackos and GOLAGODA find themselves with a robot leaning against a tree. The robot glanced up and sucked what seemed like a bud, he asked in a trance like voice, the young boys had to lean closer to hear him. He whispered in their ears, “ I’m so high… I feel like… everything around us is actually a website called NGU…”
The Young boys, hearing enough, leaned back in disgust, they had never heard of such a preposterous thing ever. “ Tell us your name my stoned robot friend.” Drackos said. The robot replied in a monotone voice, “ KANE VERSION 2, MODEL NUMBER 212.” “Version 2?” GOLAGODA replied, beating Drackos to it by a second. “The last model blazed so hard… he blazed…”
Hearing enough of this the boys turned and started off down the road again, looking back cautiously for KANE and his blazing self. No sooner had the boys saw the last of KANE, were they then toe to toe with the trollface himself. GOLAGODA gasped in shock, trollface smirked at him and said, “Problem?” and disappeared, leaving the boys rooted to the spot.
The boys saw a piece of paper on the ground, Drackos picked it up. Drackos held the paper up so GOLA could see, it read:
I see you are coming after me, I have your E-Peen GOLA. If you want it, come and get it!
Bwahaha! Umad? I bet you are!
From, :carling:
GOLA took the paper and threw it, GOLA stormed off down the path, determined to stop the trollface. Drackos ran behind him struggling to keep up.
The boys found it was getting dark, they stopped near a tree and laid under the shade. GOLA sat up suddenly, he felt someone was watching him and Drackos… GOLA heard a noise behind him and shouted, “WHO’S THERE?“ A little seed rolled out in front of him, GOLA looked at it :wtf: then what seemed to come from the seed, a tiny voice. GOLA asked, “Who are you?”
The seed replied in a shrill voice, “I am BuLLeTz, I’m so fast, like a bullet, you see.”
“Oh I see” replied GOLA. He rubbed Drackos to wake him, he didn’t wake up.
The seed disappeared from where it was, GOLA heard a noise coming from his rucksack, it was the seed! He was stealing his food! GOLA took the food from it and said, “Now come along little guy we’ve a long journey ahead little friend, it would be nice if you could leave please.”
“No no! Stay here and help you I will!”
GOLA was losing his patience, “Oh you’re making a mess!” He said in a whiney voice.
“Fine then, I will leave, killed me you have!” the seed replied and disappeared.
Drackos was dreaming a good dream, he was dreaming about a long E-Peen, he felt his was never long enough, even when it was longer than GOLA’s. This made Drackos’s dream sad, he dreamed his E-Peen fell off. But then a blue light shone in his dream, a spirit! A ghost! The figure revealed itself as a glowy figure, Drackos asked it what it was doing in his dream.
The figure replied in a dreamy voice, “My name is _Dream and I can show you your future through a dream.”
“Show me,” Drackos said.
Drackos’s vision in the dream grew blinded. Then it all became clear, he heard _Dream talking.
“I see in your future, a trollface and an E-Peen, I also see a darker part of yourself coming through, your friend GOLAGODA will be affected by this…”
Drackos absorbed this information, it seemed _Dream could sense this, because at that moment, Drackos woke up.
GOLA was sitting, watching Drackos, when all of a sudden, he woke up. Looking at Drackos, GOLA could see he had had an interesting dream. Drackos said he saw a figure in his dream that showed him the future. GOLA dismissed this as imagination, and told him to go back to sleep :megusta:
They both lay down and fell asleep, not hearing music far down the path…
The boys awoke to music in their ears, they stood up, curious. Drackos said to GOLA, “Where is that beautiful music coming from?”
GOLA put on a :megusta: face, “It’s coming from down the road, can’t you hear properly since your promotion?”
“Nevermind, GOLA, let’s check it out.”
The boys set off down the path, music of every genre filling their ears, making it seem like their ears were having orgasms. The boys reached what was the source of the music, what they saw stunned them, a massive crowd surrounded a stage. On the stage was a man with a guitar which looked more like a guitar with pieces of trash on it. A banner above the man read, “JUZZY.”
The man started playing a song, the boys had to listen, just one song, then they’d head off… After the song finished, the boys stood up and walked off, the song forever in their mind.
No sooner had the boys lost themselves down the blue and white path, they came to a small cottage, with a castle behind it, on the hill. The boys knew straight away, this was King Dopey’s Castle. The boys hurried past, determined to get to the bridge, which they knew was ahead.
They heard the door to the cottage open, a young boy came out, he looked handsome, well kept, this was obviously a relative of King Dopey and Queen DEREKTROTTER. GOLA and Drackos said, “Hi.” The boy replied in a
voice, “My name is, mvieyra, son of King Dopey and Queen DEREKTROTTER, heir to the throne.” The boys immediately bowed to him, the boy shrugged at this. GOLA and Drackos stood up, “If you don’t mind young mvieyra, we would like to get moving,” said Drackos.
The boy replied, “Ok, but beware of the bridge up ahead, it has many dangerous beings…”
“We will, and thanks for letting us past,” said GOLA.
The boys walked off down the path, not knowing what would come of them at the bridge.
Sure Enough, The boys came to the bridge, they did not believe their eyes. A little girl, with a stuffed rabbit was standing in the middle of the bridge, the boys could smell what seemed like burning flesh coming from under the bridge…
The little girl turned her head up and magically, the rabbit came to life, bearing its fangs and charging at GOLA and Drackos. Drackos and GOLA screamed and ran under the bridge hoping someone was down there, sure enough there was. The rabbit came to a halt at the gap, it turned and ran back to the girl. Under the bridge with them was a scrawny man, he introduced himself as, ROCKY-Southpaw. The boys introduced themselves, the man then said, “That there up there is the little girl called, xxtaylorxx. That rabbit you see, is possessed, the god above, Outsider, created her to kill all who wish to get past the bridge into the “Non-Prem” land.”
“How do we get past then?” asked GOLA.
“You can’t, but I can, you see me and her live by a mutual agreement, she kills and I get to eat, she trusts me.” ROCKY said.
“You’re a cannibal!” shouted Drackos.
“Damn right! And I’m going to eat you as soon as you see that girl!” replied ROCKY in reply.
The boys turned around and went back up onto the bridge, the girl was staring ahead, rabbit in hand. Drackos had an idea, he reached around into his rucksack and pulled out what seemed like a noodle. “A noodle, what good will that do, Drackos?” GOLA asked.
“This is no ordinary noodle, its name is HolyNoodlez…” Drackos replied.
“You mean that it’s not a legend?” asked GOLA.
“No, but I am fearful of its aftermath, you see, someone eats it, I get a wish, but the after-wish can come with disastrous results…” Drackos replied.
GOLA nodded and took the noodle from Drackos and ate it, the noodle tasted like the best thing in the world… Drackos knew he could use his wish.
“I wish for the cannibal man and the little girl to disappear,” said Drackos.
What came after was horrifying, the cannibal man, ROCKY and the little girl, xxtaylorxx, rose above the bridge, and were twisted together until a great light vaporised them. Leaving nothing behind but ash, which would be added to the bridge over time.
The boys horrified by this ran, across the bridge, trying to get the horrifying thought out of their heads. The boys then stopped to gather their breath, then kept on walking. As the boys rounded a bend, they saw, and instinctively knew, this was where the Trollface resided, in the village of the Interwebz.
The boys walked through the village of Interwebz, the villagers obviously all “Non-Prems”
Governed by Trollface, the “Non-Prems” were hated in the land of “Prems.”
GOLA and Drackos, soon found themselves at the door to Trollface’s manor, Trollface’s guard appeared, he was the legendary D3stRukxiOn, taken by Trollface from the land of “Prems” to guard his manor, D3stRukxiOn was a troubled young man, who bashed nearly everyone he didn’t like. D3stRukxiOn took a swing at Drackos, which took his breath out of him, he landed on the ground. GOLA told D3stRukxiOn, “Stop!”
D3stRukxiOn wasn’t listening, he began to kick Drackos. GOLA heard a screeching noise, it was a fighter jet! Inside was was the one and only, Air.Jordan, the legendary Air Force Fighter Pilot!
Air.Jordan fired the machine guns on D3stRukxiOn, which teared him apart. Drackos stood up weakly next to GOLA. Air.Jordan turned his jet around and flew off, knowing he was done here.
GOLA and Drackos found that the manor door was open, they entered, following a red carpet, to a room with only with a chair and computer in it. The chair turned around, to reveal the :carling: He was holding GOLA’s E-Peen! Trollface stood up and made a speech, “GOLA, Drackos, you made it… GOLA, you have travelled this far to get your E-Peen I have a feeling you would like some answers?”
“I sure would.” Said GOLA.
Trollface replied, “You see, I took your E-Peen, because I could not possibly take King Dopey’s, with his E-Peen, I could rule the land of EnGeeYoo. I took yours because you are important to King Dopey, if he doesn’t give his E-Peen to me, he will be killed along with you…”
Drackos stepped forward and stood next to Trollface, “GOLA, you really think that Trollface could do this alone? I took your E-Peen and gave it to Trollface…”
GOLA could only rage, :FU:
At that moment, Trollface lifted his hand and reached towards his face, he pulled off what was realised as a mask… GOLA could only gasp. The man who was “Trollface” was actually Chris2k7sears!
“It all makes sense now!” shouted GOLA, “when King Dopey banished you, you grew jealous and gathered all the “Non-Prems” to exact revenge!”
“Exactly,” Chris sneered.
There was a loud a noise outside, then silence… King Dopey appeared at the doorway.
“Thought you could get kill me and take my E-Peen Huh?” said Dopey, “wrong.”
Chris’s face grew tight with anger :FU:
He knew he was beaten, nothing could match Dopey’s power. Chris let himself be taken, along with Drackos, who would suffer an “Infraction Order” and be banished from the land forever.
It was then on that GOLA got his E-Peen back, Dopey was kind enough to add more length to GOLA’s E-Peen.
The “Non-Prems” and “Prems” rejoiced together, no more would there be rivalry between them, everything was happy in the land of EnGeeYoo…
High above in the sky, lived Outsider and his brother magglass1. They both looked down on the land. “This land is free once more,” said Outsider.
“I agree, but why did Freddy write this story?” asked magglass1.
Freddy Krueger appeared, “Meh for the rep, :lol: jokes fellas, I had fun writing it, hope you have fun reading it!”
THE END
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06-02-2011, 04:00 AM
#57
Grimsley33
On Top of the Game
06-02-2011, 06:58 AM
#58
Vegetᶏ
Freddy Krueger
Originally posted by Air.Jordan
I love that. "legendary Air Force fighter pilot" I'm hitting you up with some rep when I get it man 
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I love that "legendary Air Force fighter pilot" I'm hitting you up with some rep, when I can use the thank button again
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I love that "legendary Air Force fighter pilot" I'm hitting you up with some rep, when I can use the thank button again
Originally posted by Winning
What grade did you get on it? Obviously a tri force ▲▲▲
@ Air.Jordan: Haha Thanks Man! Glad You Like Your Part :y:
@ Winning: My Teacher Thought It Was Unique In Itself, I Got A "B"
06-03-2011, 02:46 AM
#59
TheRandomGuy128
Hates Grammar Nazis
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