Post: eXo: An untold story..
08-01-2011, 07:39 PM #1
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Well before I post this epic story, a little history. It was written by Cobra-D, the characters in the story are all real people from NGU, most are "OG's" or old timers so most people wont know who they are, but regardless you can still enjoy the story.
Cobra has posted a small portion of this story already, back in 2010, but never did finish it. But now here is the full story in all its full glory and detail. Oh and its quite a read so just read it and enjoy, also if you did enjoy it and would like cobra to make more let him know!

In 2014, during an economic down turn, a young man named Lionel Belithem rose to power in the country of North Korea after the mysterious death of Kim Jong-ill. He had a way with words, which made him loved by the people. He soon took over China through negotiations with the leader of the country. A month later he made an alliance with Russia, Iraq, and Iran.

With this new found power he launched an attack upon Germany, and the rest of the Middle East. With the threat growing more severe, the U.S, along with Canada, Mexico, and other super powers planned an assault against him. Rather than start a war with other countries, he soon put a special military task force together, which he called the Ghosts. They were trained in every combat style there was and given nano suits. The suits made the person stronger and faster. He sent the task force to kill the leaders of Britain, France, and Turkey and soon invaded the now leaderless countries.

Knowing the rest of the world would attack back, Lionel sends the ghost to capture the leaders of the nations that did not stand with him. He demanded them to sign a treaty which would hand all power to him or he would blow up major cities with hydrogen bombs planted in the cities by the ghost and hang them. Not wanting millions of death on their hands; they signed the treaty, forever launching the world in an endless war. After which he broadcast them on television to tell the world what they did. Once they did he ordered them to be killed then and there, which they were in front of millions. An hour later five of the fifteen of the bombs went off.

​Once all was said and done, he forces everyone out of political office and sets up his own government with him as the absolute ruler his new country, which he calls Zorta. During the first meeting with his allied countries, he betrays his comrades by having them all shot while discussing plans of the future, along with their men, taking over there countries. He soon controls half of the world with the rest banding together just to survive. He begins taxing highly on the middle class, with all the money going towards the war. He calls his new government Grand Telos. Soon a world police force is established, along with the grand army of the Telos Regime.

​10 years have passed since Lionel Came into power. A man with light skin, dark hair in general’s armor that’s been slightly altered is sitting down at a bar drinking a glass of Jack Daniel. He looks forward with a blank face and just sips his drink. The Bartender is busy cleaning the counter while two guys next to him talk about how hard it is to work in construction. An arm wrestling competition is taking place behind him, he doesn’t care too much for, seeing how he knows he could beat them all easily.

Soon the bartender comes towards the man in the general’s armor.

“Haven’t seen you around here before, you gotta name?” asked the bartender.

“People call me Outsider.” The man replies. The bartender looks at him curiously; Outsider doesn’t make eye contact with him and just looks down at his drink.

“We don’t get many people from the army in here.” The bartender says.

“I’m not with the army anymore, I decided quit” says outsider.

“Oh yeah, so why did you quit?” asked the bartender.

A huge explosion is heard as the whole bar starts to shake violently. The bartender ducks under his bar while some hop under nearby tables and try to head for the exit. Outsider however remains calm as he sits and holds his glass. A minute passes when the shaking stops. Confusion comes over everyone. Everyone starts to talk about what just happened and could have caused it. The bartender peaks his head from under the counter with his eyes wide and a surprise expression on his face.

Outsider pours down his drink and says, ”I just blew up one of their buildings”. He gets up, puts money on the counter and leaves out the door.


Outsider walks down the street as people are run past him in fright. He looks up and sees the building that he just blew up wondering how long it would take them to realize it was him who did it. As he wonders this, twelve peace troopers come and surround him.

“Guess not that long.” Outsider thinks to himself.

“We have orders to take you into custody, if you resist we will use force.” One of the troopers says.

“Really now? Well then, this should be interesting.” Outsider replies. One of the troopers moves to put Outsider under arrest. When he’s just about to put the cuffs on, Outsider grabs the cuffs, swings behind him and starts to choke him with the cuffs. The troopers point their guns at him.

“How I love a challenge.” Outsider says under his breath.

Outsider pulls out the trooper gun with his free hand and shoots three of the troopers behind him, while using the trooper he has as a shield. Two men move to the right side of him while threes move to the left.

"Stop resisting or we will open fire.” One of the troopers demanded.

“They never do learn.” Outsider says softly. He breaks the troopers neck and lunges at one of the troopers on his right, grabs the gun to deflect the gun fire away from him which manages to hit one of the troopers. He then grabs a knife from the trooper and stabs him with it; he gets the gun and shoots another trooper while he stabs one on his side. He looks up at the remaining four. All are pointing their guns at him.

“Now you di……” But before one of the trooper can finish, a knife hits him in the throat, he drops dead. The troopers look around to see if anyone is around.

Outsider stands they’re a little confuse but focus. A figure soon appears from the darkness He’s dress in a black armor chest protector and green camo pants and a orange hood blocking his face. He moves closer holding a sword on his shoulder. The troopers order him to freeze; he does not stop and moves closer.

They give a warning that if he doesn’t move that they will shoot. All he does is keep walking towards them. One of the troopers orders them to fire. They fire upon him; the man uses his sword to block their shots. The troopers seize fire.

“How could he block gun fire?” says one of the troopers, amazed.

“Coltz is just one crazy bastard.” Outsider replies realizing who it is.

Coltz charges towards them, blocking their gun fire with his sword, He chops down one of the troopers with his sword at the same time pulling out his gun and shoots another trooper down. The last trooper alive goes down on his knees and begins to beg them to spare his life. Outsider picks him up and whisper to him in his ear and lets him go.

He soon runs off into the darkness leaving behind his weapon and fallen comrades. Coltz pulls off his hood revealing a man with blond short hair and blue eyes

“So what did you tell him?” asked Coltz.

“Told him your gay.” Outsider remarks.

“So that’s how you treat the person that saved your life huh. Well that’s the last time I do that for you.” Replies Coltz.

Awesome faceidn’t you say that during the mission in South Africa?” Replies Outsider. Coltz pauses for a second as he looks at outsider’s grin. “Yeah well, you still owe me money.” Coltz replied

“So what are doing here?” asked Outsider.

“Some troopers came by my place asking about where you could be, I asked them why they would want to know and they said you went rogue on them. First I told them I had no clue where the hell you were but they demanded to search my home.” Coltz says.

“Then what happened?” asked Outsider.

"I killed them. Shot them when they were in the kitchen, gonna be a bitch to clean up when I get home, well I guess I can’t go home now, but yeah anyway I grabbed my gun and sword threw on my suit and came looking for you, that’s when I saw the building go boom. I realize only you would do something like that, I also know that you like to see plans fall through which meant you would be close to where the big boom happened, which as you can tell by the massive amount of dead people surrounding us right now is probably not the best thing to do.” Coltz Replied.

Coltz and outsider look towards at the burning building; civilians can be heard clamoring over what just happened.

​“Looks like your gonna need my help to get everything back to it once was.” Coltz says.

“You know if you help me, you’ll be hunted down and branded as a traitor.” Outsider says.

Coltz looks at the burning building alongside Outsider, He then turns to him and says, “I’ll help you anyway, only because you still owe me money and I think I just lost my cable service, along with my house. But we can’t do this on our own, we're gonna need some help if we're gonna do this.”

“You got anyone in mind?” Outsider asks. Coltz then smiles and says;”I might know a few.” Coltz and Outsider soon start to walk away into an alley; just as they do, the burning building soon collapse, sending a cloud of dust over a mile wide area.

​Later on Coltz and Outsider enter a bar named the lucky 7 located in downtown of what use to be Tampa, Florida before being renamed Zithora, New France. Smoke fills the air of the bar from cigarettes and cigars. The bar is filled with low lives and wannabe criminals. The bartender is busy handing out drinks while a few are playing a game of pool.

“So who are we looking for?” asked Outsider.

“Um a guy named Matt, he use to be a part of the elite task force, we even worked with him once, he quit about a year ago cause it got boring for him apparently, and I heard he likes to hang around here.” Coltz says. Coltz looks around to see if he can spot him while Outsider is trying to hold his breath from the awful smell within the bar.

“Well hurry and find him, I don’t know how much longer I can stand the smell in here.” Outsider says as he looks at his left to see a guy at a table smoking a cigar, he asked him politely to put it out or at least blow it in a different direction.

The guy looks at him for a second, and then he inhales and blows directly in Outsiders face. Outsider gives him a dirty look before moving on. At the counter, Three men can be seen, one is dress in a trench coat enjoying his drink and seems to be paying no attention to what’s going on around him. Another one can be seen hitting on the female bartender. The last guy who with a dark face and short black hair, wearing a black and white striped suit with 3 pockets on the side and a gun holster on his left side and a hunting knife on his right, can be seen talking to the bartender, he soon turns around and notices Outsider and Coltz.

He takes one last sip of his drink, gets up and walks towards Coltz and Outsider.

“Allow me to introduce myself; people call me Lasthope or Hope for short.” Lasthope says. “Yeah, what do you want?” Outsider asks not really caring.

“Well you see my friend plays poo…”

“I don’t play pool.” Outsider Interrupts.

“Well that’s great because my friend there sucks.” Lasthope says pointing at a big guy in a modify peace trooper suit painted black with green banners hanging on the side and an elite solders helmet fitted with a breathing apparatus.

“Shit, that's Matt.” Coltz says.

“How do you know?” asked Outsider.

“He was involved in terrible plane accident, they had to put him in that to save his life” Coltz says. Coltz heads over to him.

“Wait why do you need Matt for?” asked Lasthope. “That’s none of your concern.” Replies Outsider.

He then pushes Lasthope out of the way and follows Coltz. Matt is busy playing pool when Coltz comes up to him and asked, “Matt, my name is Coltz and this is Outsider, we did a mission together last year, do you think I can talk to you for a minute, it’s important.”

Matt replies, “Just give me one sec.” Matt then takes aim and shoots, and sinks three cue balls and wins the game.

“That’ll be 100 bucks, pay up.” Matt tells the guy he just beat. Matt collects his money and turns around to talk to Coltz where he then spots Outsider who he recognizes. “Outsider, I haven’t seen you since our squad did operations Diego two years ago. Staying out trouble I hope.” Matt says.

“I wouldn’t say that, I mean he did just blow up a building.” Coltz says.

“Whoa that was you, damn people have been freaking out about that. Nice” remarks Lasthope who just caught up with them.

“So what do you guys want?” asked Matt. “We're trying to put together a team to bring down Lionel and were hoping that you help us.” Replies Outsider.

“He's been in power for way to long and has turn the world into a corrupt place to live where the rich get richer, the poor stay slaves to the more powerful, and a practical paradise for the criminal, so do you think you ca help us?” Coltz asks.

“Course we’ll help you, nothings more fun then bringing down an evil dictator who’s ruining the world now is there.” Lasthope says with a smile as he puts his arms around both outsider and Coltz who seems to be a little annoyed by him.

“I don’t know, I’ll have to see. Don’t really feel like taking down anyone.” Matt Says.

“Ah c’mon Matt, it’ll be fun kicking some dictators ass.” Lasthope says.

"A dictator we use to work for." Matt replies

"since when did you care about loyalty?" Lasthope asks

Just then, two men enter the bar, one wearing a black shirt and the other wearing a blue shirt with Bob Marley on it. The one in the black shirt has a scar on his left cheek while the one in the blue is wearing sunglasses with a missing tooth.

“Hey! You two cheated me out of our money! Say’s the guy with the scar. They both pull out their guns and aim it at both Lasthope and Matt.

“Ah crap not again.” Lasthope says. The two guys move closer to where Lasthope, Outsider, Coltz, and Matt are. Outsider moves in front of the guy with the scar and says, “Look, I’m going to have to ask you guys if you could just drop whatever beef you have against them before I end up hurting you two”. The guy Outsider is standing in front of looks at him with no plan of moving an inch.

“Well you know what; I say you better get the hell out of my way before I give you a beating you will never forget.” The guy says. He proceeds to move around Outsider but is stopped by him. Outsider then says, “I’m afraid I can’t let you do that.” The guy smiles briefly before taking a swing at Outsider, Outsider however stop's the punch and punches him in the stomach causing him to drop his gun. He then gives him a left hook, causing him to fall backwards on to a table.

The guy with the missing tooth points his gun at outsider but before he can get a shot out, Lasthope stabs him in the arm causing him to scream in pain. While trying to escape he bumps into a huge biker. The biker pushes him into a table where two thugs happen to be sitting at. One of the thugs gets up, walks to the biker and punches him. The biker’s friends see’s this and jump to defend him.

Soon a bar fight breaks out. One of the thug tries to hit Matt with a pool stick but Matt catches the stick and breaks it in half, he then kicks him in the face knocking him out. A guy grabs Coltz from behind, Coltz steps on his foot and bites his hand. He soon lets go of his hand. Coltz then turns around and kicks him on the side of his head. Lasthope goes and gets his knife from the guy he stabbed in the arm. When he does this, a guy with an eye patch attacks him. He pins Lasthope on the floor while trying to stab him with a kitchen knife.

Lasthope with one hand keeps the knife from plunging into him, and with the other hand he squeezes his arm where his muscle meets the bone causing the guy to scream in pain. The guy with the eye patch soon lets go of Lasthope. When he does Lasthope grabs his knife and plunges it into the guy remaining eye, blinding him.

Suddenly, a loud bang is heard and everyone stops fighting.

The noise turns out to be a shotgun fired by the bartender.

“Alright that’s it!” The bartender shouts out. “There will be no more fighting in here tonight, now all of ya beat it, this establishment is closed for the night.”

Everyone starts heading towards the door; some walk while others limp. “As for you four” The bartender says to Outsider, Coltz, Lasthope, and Matt, while pointing his shotgun at them.

“I never wanna see you four in this bar ever again! Now get before I shoot you where you stand!” yelled the bartender. The four head out of the bar not wanting to get shot at where they stand.

Soon the four of them are outside of the bar.

“Man I can’t believe we got kicked out of another bar.” Lasthope says disappointed.

“Well seeing how we’re kicked out of every bar, I guess we could help you out now.” Matt says.

“Alright then, let’s go and see if we can’t get anyone else to help us out.” Coltz says.

“Great, who else can we get” asked Outsider. Lasthope thinks for a minute before looking at Matt and says, “Elfmotat!”

“Well he has been dying to destroy Grand Telos for years now. I also know where that son of a bitch is hanging out.” Matt says.

Everyone starts walking away until Coltz realizes Outsider isn’t behind him. Outsider is standing looking at the guy who blew smoke in his face earlier.

“Yo outsider, are you coming?” Coltz asks.

“Yeah just give me a sec.” Outsider replies. He walks over to the man who is standing against a wall enjoying his cigar. He sees Outsider and asks, “Yeah and what the hell you want bitch?” Outsider grabs him by the collar of his shirt and forces his cigar into his mouth and down his throat. As he begins to choke, Outsider tells him, “smoking can be bad for your health, I would quit if I were you.” He hits him hard in the stomach, which causes him to cough out the cigar. He walks away leaving the man on the ground coughing up the remainder of his cigar.

An hour later, the four of them are on their way to where Elfmotat is hanging out. Drones are seen flying by while Peace troopers are all around.

“Maybe it’s just me but you guys really think it’s a good idea walking around with a guy who just blew up a building?” Lasthope asks.

Awesome faceon’t forget he also killed hmm eight Peace troopers, oh and participated in a bar fight.” Coltz adds.

“This day just keeps getting better.” Lasthope remarks sarcastically. As they continue to walk, several Peace troopers turn and start to look at the group suspiciously. They keep moving as they try to ignore the peace troopers around them.

Some troopers start to follow them from behind, making sure they keep their distance from the group. The group soon comes to an alley. Even though the alley is not the way to where Elfmotat is, they decide to turn into it. As they keep walking, troopers follow behind.

“I really don’t feel like running right now.” Lasthope says under his breath. Soon they take off. The peace troopers start running after them. As the group heads for the end of the alley, three triangle shaped drones with round edges and two circulating blades on the outside for balance, flight, and movement drop down in front of them. The group soon stops at the site of the drones. The sides of the drones open up revealing mini gun turrets. The peace troopers behind are just a few feet away.

“You think you can stop their gun fire Coltz?” asked Outsider.

“Possibly but it’ll be hard.” Coltz replies.

“Yeah that’s nice.” Matt remarks.

Matt moves towards the two drones. One of the drones orders Matt to surrender or they will open fire on him. From behind, the troopers are right behind them. Suddenly, Matt grabs both drones by the barrels of their turrets. The drones start firing wildly in all direction, the group duck down to avoid the gun fire. Matt, still holding the barrels smashes the drones into each other. The rest of the team gets up quickly and start running, amazed at what Matt just did. Matt suit is covered with bullet holes with no sign of injuries; his left shoulder however soon starts to bleed, along with his left hand.

Awesome faceidn’t that hurt?” Coltz says. “Pain is just a state of mind” Matt replies

They head down a block and down another alley and back onto a street. Sirens are heard coming towards the group. A light from above centers on them, the group looks up and discovers that the light is coming from a helicopter. Ten peace troopers lower down from two helicopters in front of the team. The group charge toward the troopers. Lasthope pulls out his knife and stabs one of the troopers. Matt Pulls out both his pistols, he throws one to Outsider. They both take aim at a trooper and shoot them down. Coltz while blocking the shots, ignore the troopers and grabs hold of one of the lines that a trooper just repelled down and starts to climb up.

A trooper soon spots Coltz, before he can get a shot off Matt grabs his gun from him and hits him hard with it. Lasthope engages in a hand to hand battle with one of the troopers. Another trooper grabs Lasthope from behind, as the trooper moves in to deal a powerful blow to Lasthope, Lasthope drops to the floor. He then flips the trooper holding him over his back. Lasthope pulls out his gun and shoots the trooper standing. Matt and outsider take care of the remaining troopers.

Coltz manages to get inside the helicopter. The pilot pulls out his gun but Coltz knocks it out of his hand before he can aim it and then knocks him out. Coltz turn the helicopter around and shoots out the other chopper and lowers the helicopter so the rest of the group can get in. with the team inside, Coltz takes off towards their destination.

“Since when do you know how to fly?” Outsider asks.

“Forgot, now shut up and hold on.” Coltz replies. Two helicopters appear and begin to pursue them. Coltz tries to lose them but can’t seem to shake them.

“Okay, this is getting boring. I have to lose these bitches before more show up. Everyone hold on. This is gonna hurt.” Coltz says. Coltz starts to descend with the other choppers start to shoot. Just ahead of the team are two buildings with an opening not big enough for a chopper to fly through.

“You might want to start pulling up right about now” Outsider says.

“That’s why I said it’s gonna hurt.” Coltz Replies somewhat nervous.

Coltz flies toward the narrow opening of the two buildings. The propellers of the choppers break off while the rest of the chopper glides for awhile before falling and crashing into a wall. The other two choppers avoid the buildings and fly off into the distance. Coltz kicks down the side door of the crashed chopper. The rest exit the crashed helicopter, all battered and bruise.

“Yeah next time try not to kill us.” Lasthope says while rubbing his neck.

“Good news is we’re here.” Matt says looking unhurt by what just happened while pointing at a small clinic.

“Then let’s get out of here before those damn troopers come back.” Coltz says

The team head inside the clinic, everyone turns around and looks at them before going back to what they were doing. Coltz and Outsider go to talk to the receptionist while Lasthope gets a snack from the vending machine and Matt makes sure there are no Peace troopers around and disconnect the security cam to be safe.

“Um excuses me miss but may we speak to um, hey hope what’s Elfmotat’s real name” Outsider ask.

“Um it’s Jack I believe.” Lasthope replies while banging the vending machine to get his snack.

“Um yeah may we speak to Jack please” Asked Outsider to the receptionist.

The receptionist looks at Outsider with a dull look and then goes back to reading her magazine.

“Can you please get Jack right now.” Outsider asks impatiently.

“Sir, I’m gonna have to ask you to leave before you get hurt.” Replied the Receptionist as she slowly pulls a gun from under her desk.

Just when she is about to pull out her gun completely, a man comes though the back door wearing a doctors coat with a brown button up shirt with a black tie and black pants.

“Liz, what did I tell you? The man asks.

“Not to shoot the guests” Liz says disappointed.

The man looks up at Outsider and Coltz standing at the desk. “Travis, haven’t seen you in awhile, and JR, you still a crazy mofo.” The man says.

“Yes, he is” Lasthope says still trying to get a snack.

Awesome faceo we know you, and how do you know my real name?” Outsider asks.

“I was the medic for squad 56-B along with DNAs here. We accompany your team across the Amazon River during the mission delta assault. ” The man says.

“Yeah now I remember you, best dam medic I ever saw. Your also not the most lethal one either, How’s life treating you now Elfmotat.” Coltz says.

“Been better I guess. Dam taxes making it hard to keep this place open, but please call me jack.” Jack replies.

“We were wondering if you like to join our team we’re putting together; we want to bring down Lionel.” Outsider says. Jack after hearing this smiles and says, “**** yeah!”

“Hey bitches, can we move this conversation somewhere else. Some peace troopers are headed this way” Matt says.

“Yeah sure, we can talk more in the back and even treat your wounds, come. Oh and Liz don’t shoot the troopers, yet.” Jack says.

They all head toward the back except for Lasthope who is still trying to get his snack. They turn around to see why he isn’t coming and Coltz asked, “You coming Hope?” Lasthope looks up at him and says, “Huh? Oh yeah just give me one sec.” He pulls out his gun and starts shooting at the vending machine, his gun runs out. Lasthope then kicks in the remaining glass of the vending machine and grabs a candy bar that hasn’t been damage or have any pieces of glass in it and proceeds to eat it.

Everyone else starts to look at him with a little fear and amazement. Matt shakes his head in embarrassment while Jack starts laughing. Lasthope then looks around at all the people and finally at the group. He stops chewing for a sec then starts again and says “what, I was hungry and I just came from a crash, leave me alone.” Jack continues to laugh and says, “I see you haven’t changed one bit.”

“I guess, oh and by the way your machine seems to be broken.” Lasthope says.

Jack begins to check them for any major trauma or broken bones.

“So what made you decide to turn against them?” Jack asks Outsider.

“Got tired of them telling me what to do, I was nothing more than a killing machine rather than a person.” Outsider says.

“Please, we were all considered nothing more than objects. Not to mention when I was stationed with you, you didn’t seem to mine it much saying its better than being in the slums. So tell me the real reason.” Jack says.

Outsider looks down with a depress look on his face. He soon starts hearing sounds of people screaming and explosions. He also hears a woman begging for him to help her.

“Hey, hey outsider you okay man?” Jack asks with a concerned look on his face. Outsider looks around for a sec to see where he is, and realizes that it was just all in his head as he sees Jack, Matt, and Coltz looking at him with some concern. Then he finally sees Lasthope sitting on a chair enjoying his chocolate bar with his feet up on a desk before turning back to Jack.

“Umm yeah, I was just thinking. But yeah that was the real reason why I left.” Outsider says.

“Well you seem to be good, a few cuts and bruises but no major injuries.” Jack says.

“So, are you gonna help us?” Coltz asks. Jack goes to a cabinet and pulls out some bottle of pills.

“I guess the other doctors here can survive without me, not that busy here anyway. Sure, I can help. Here take these, it’ll help with any pain you guys might have. Also I’m going to have to take out those tracking chips inside you guys” Jack says.

“What tracking chips?” Coltz asks.

Awesome faceuring the mandatory health exam when you first join the army, they plant a micro chip into your spine; it monitors your health which makes future exams. The chip also allows the army to follow you wherever you may be. I should know, I helped invent the damn thing. But no worries, this should take care of it by frying the chip,” Jack says. He pulls out a small device that resembles a hot glue gun with a needle attach to the tip. He sticks it into each ones spine. When Jack comes to Matt, he notices his bleeding shoulder and hand.

“Matt, let’s go in the other room. I’ll fix that shoulder and hand of yours.” Jack says with a smile.

“That’s what you get for trying to take down two drones with your hands. You get shot at. Hope you learned your lesson.” Lasthope says with a small grin.

“Shut up before I shoot you.” Said Matt not amuse at Lasthope. Matt follows jack to a different room to get fixed up.

​“Okay so who else do we know that could help us bring down da man and doesn’t mind being labeled a traitor and hunted down like a dog? Lasthope asks. Coltz thinks for a second, and looks outside before asking Outsider, “What part of town are we in?”

Outsider thinks for a second and responds, “Lion’s Den district, why?” “Cause, I might know someone who could help, come. Oh and Hope, stay here and tell Elf and Matt we went down to the gym on Dims Street. Okay.” Coltz says.

“Fine, but pick me up a playboy magazine on the way back.” Lasthope says.

​Outsider and Coltz head out of the clinic and down the street. Behind them they can hear the sounds of sirens from the site where the helicopter crashed. The two of them soon turn a corner and disappear out of sight from the troopers who are doing patrols in the area. They walk for about two blocks when they reach an old building with the words The Man gym in big rusted letters on the side of the building.

“This place could use a makeover.” Outsider says.

“It looks better on the inside, trust me.” Coltz says. The two of them head inside, as they enter, Outsider is amaze on how it looks on the inside. With white, clean walls, a polish wooden floor, and a painted ceiling of two men in a sword fight. A ten square foot garden is seen on the other side of the building, with a sky dome above to allow sun light for the plant life and fountain in the middle where people can be seen talking.

​“Wish the gym I work out in looked this nice.” Outsider says.

“Yeah well this is a different type of gym. This is the place I learned the art of Punto Di Arresto.” Coltz says.

“Punto Di Arresto. What’s that?” Outsider asks. A man with long hair and glasses who’s wearing a black silk robe holding a katana appears from behind them and says with a deep voice, “It’s the art of dodging bullets and deflecting them. Hi my name is Nick, I’m one of the trainers here how may I help you.” The man says extending his right hand out, Coltz shakes his hand and says “I’m…” but before he can say anymore, Nick interrupts him and says “JR, Been awhile since you were here. What may I do for you today?”

​“We need you and Dustin to help us take down Grand Telos.” Coltz says. Nick looks at Coltz for a minute figuring out if he’s really serious. After a second or two he calls for Dustin.

“What up.” Said a man that appeared out of know where beside Nick.

The man has blue eyes with blond short hair. He has a white shirt on with a long sleeve on his left arm and black gloves with combat boots and black army pants with a katana on his back. A small scar on the left side of his chin can be seen also. “Where the hell you come?” Outsider asks a little confused.

Awesome faceustin here can move fast.” Nick says.

“How fast?” Outsider asks. “As fast as light, well close to it anyways.” Dustin says with a smile. “How can you move so fast?” Outsider asks. “Well, about a year ago, my legs were badly damage in an explosion out in the Sierra Desert; I was stationed there for about four month. Some rebels were reported there and I was assign to terminate them. So my legs were damage by a land mine but they healed, short of, meaning I lost part of my right leg and my left foot. They started to hurt after awhile, to a point where it was getting hard to do much. So five months ago I went to go see a guy who could replace my legs with robotics. Apparently he did the same thing to some ex trooper but to a higher degree. He replaced my legs with new ones and my left arm and right eye. So now I can go really fast.” Dustin says.

“That’s cool I guess but why he replace your left arm eye? Did they get injured or something?” Outsider asks. “No, I just thought it be cool, but my legs have a limit. If I run light speed fast for to long, my legs will heat up and explode, and kill me. So I have this meter called the Mobile Limb Power Indicator on my arm to tell me if they’re heating up.” Replied Dustin as he pulls up his sleeve.

“These two want our help taking down Grand Telos. Want to?” Nick. Dustin thinks for a sec and says, “Sure why not. Let’s see if we can’t get Erif to help out shall we. He would help out a lot.”

“Who’s Erif?” Coltz asks.

​“Wait and find out.” Nick says. They walk pass the fountain and down a small hall and soon reach a mirror at the end of the hall. Dustin lifts part of the wallpaper, which reveals a small green button. He then pushes it. The mirror opens up revealing another room. It’s a decent size room. With white walls and a polish wooden floor, there is however a white circle painted on the ground. On the opposite side of the room is a bald headed dark skinned man sitting on the floor with his eyes shut. The only thing he is wearing is sweat pants.

​“That’s Erif, its short for Erifnosti. Hey Erif we have guest.” Dustin says. Erif opens his eye revealing he is lacking an iris, pupil, lens, and cornea on both eyeballs.

“What’s up with his eyes? How come they look like that?” Coltz asks.

“He’s part of the Dios Humanos clan located somewhere in Spain. They were a group of people who were shall we say were gifted. They could do things that would amaze you.” Outsider says

“Yeah, how did you know?” Nick asks.

“I was supposed to go to their village and kill them but I told them that no army in the world could stop them after I went there to see how big a threat they could really be. Once I told them this, they decided to cancel the attack and just bomb them instead.” Replied Outsider sadly.

“Wait so what can they do then?” asked Coltz.

Outsider pulls out the gun Matt gave him and hands it to Coltz and says, “Here, shoot him.” Coltz looks at Outsider as though he just snapped.

Awesome faceude, it’s okay. Just shoot him.” Dustin says calmly. Coltz hesitates for a minute but finally points the gun at Erif who is still sitting there relaxed. Coltz stands there still pointing the gun at Erif deciding on what to do next. He looks at Nick who seems calm about the whole thing. Coltz then pulls the trigger.

He immediately drops the gun and backs away looking at the gun thinking about how he just shot someone who didn’t do anything wrong. He looks up and sees Erif still sitting there uninjured. Amazed, Coltz looks closer to see if he miss and notices that the bullet has stopped in mid air a few inches away from where fire is sitting. The bullet then drops to the ground.

“How did he just do that?” Coltz asks amaze at what he just saw.

“The human body is a complicated thing. Some say the people of the Dios Humanos clan simply evolved to a more amazing species, others say there not even from earth. Then there the whole government testing theory going around” Dustin says.

“They can do a lot more then stop a piece of lead, they can create force fields, control objects with their minds, and even create these blue energy spheres in the palm of their hands which they can throw at people. I hate it when they did that to me.” Outsider says.

“So Erif, me and Nick are going to help them take down Grand Telos, Wanna help?” asked Dustin. “A chance to kill the people who destroyed my family, there’s nothing else I would rather do.” Erif say fiercely. “Okay well I’m going to go change into my jeans and red shirt and tell the other teachers we’re leaving.” Nick says. Once Nick returns wearing his untied robe over his black jean’s with military grade boots and red shirt, they head out of the building. The five of them start to walk back to the clinic where Matt, Jack, and Lasthope are waiting.

“So how does Punto Di Arresto work?” Outsider asks as they walk back to the clinic.

“It’s pretty much the stopping of time, shorta. Well you know how when you free fall, time slows down. That can be controlled. It takes a lot of work to do though, a lot of concentration and will. Once you learn it though you can pretty much pause, rewind, and slow down time, which all takes place in a fraction of a second.” Nick says.

“It’s like having TiVo inside your head. It’s ****ing awesome.” Dustin says with a large grin.

“Yeah same thing pretty much. Though your body cannot move faster cause of it, your body moves at the same rate it would in real time and that’s why you have to have great reflexes, be coordinated, and strong.” Coltz says.

“That’s why only eight people know how to do this art correctly.” Nick says.

“Who are the eight?” Outsider asks. “Well me, Coltz, Nick, the two guys at the gym named Razor and Hank, um this old guy name Silo in Australia, a bounty hunter named Wild Catt. She maybe one of the best one at Punto Di Arresto and she also uses a cane sword, oh and that guy over there.” Dustin says pointing at a man in an elite soldier’s armor with fifteen peace troopers behind him.

“You know Outsider, you and your little friends have been causing me problems today. I mean with you going rogue, blowing up an important building of ours, killing my men, oh and destroying one of our choppers. Oh and look you’re protecting one of those damn people with the white eyes. You know that they are supposed to be dead. I guess I’ll have to finish him off like I did with the others like him.” The elite soldier says. Erif looks at the elite soldier with anger. A blue energy sphere soon forms in his left hand. He throws it directly at the soldier. The soldier ducks in time, causing the sphere to hit a Peace trooper behind him.

He looks behind him and sees the fallen Peace trooper and then looks at Erif who stares at him angrily.

“Oh you shouldn’t have done that. Now you all die.” The soldier says furiously. The fourteen peace troopers start to shoot at them while the elite soldier charges them. Dustin, Nick, and Coltz pull out their swords and start blocking the shots. Erif holds out his hand and start moving forward; the shots fired at him simply drop to the ground. Outsider charges at the elite soldier. The soldier gets ready to punch Outsider but he moves under the punch and elbows him in the back.

Erif moves closer to the peace troopers, one of them pulls out a knife and tries to stab him. Erif first breaks the hand he’s holding the knife with and then grabs his neck. He produces an energy sphere and pushes it through the soldier. He screams in agony as it slowly kills him. Once the energy sphere goes through the trooper, Fire pulls it out of him and throws it at another trooper. Dustin moves to the side of one of the troopers, quickly moves around him and waves at another peace trooper. The trooper points at him and begins to shoot. Dustin moves away in time causing the trooper to shoot down his own. The trooper is stun at what just happen, at that moment Nick charges at him and cuts off his head while Coltz slashes down a guy who was about to shoot him. Outsider and the elite soldier are busy in hand to hand combat.

No matter what Outsider tries to do, the elite soldier blocks all his moves. He tries to kick him in the stomach only to get his leg caught and elbowed in the thigh. While that’s happening, Dustin starts blocking a trooper’s gun fire as he move closer to him, as the trooper makes sure he keeps his distance from Dustin. Dustin moves To the side of the trooper leaving a huge crack in the floor where he once stood. The trooper stumbles back after seeing Dustin right next to him. Dustin grabs him and throws him at another trooper who was busy shooting at Erif. Dustin moves over them before they can even blink and plunges his sword into both of them.

As Dustin does this, a soldier behind him points his gun point blank at his head. Erif throws an energy sphere at the trooper before he can pull the trigger. Dustin turns around quickly and slashes the guy in half. Nick chops down three men while Coltz runs over to where Outsider is. The remaining troopers surround Coltz and Nick.

They begin to block the shots but know that they can’t keep it up for long. Erif Moves and plunges energy spheres through one of the troopers. Dustin grabs his sword and runs toward the troopers making sure not to go to fast or risk his legs blowing up. Coltz blocks a troopers shots and drops to the floor while at the same time pulling out his gun. The guy looks down to see Coltz pointing a gun at him, before he can shoot Coltz fires and kills him. Dustin leaps over one of the troopers and plunges his sword into another. Nick slashes his sword into one of the troopers and grabs the last one and forces him into one of Erif’s energy sphere.

They turn around to see Outsider and the elite soldier fighting. Outsider is able to block his punches. He grabs the elite soldiers arm as he tries to force him down but the soldier counters it by punching outsider with his free hand. Outsider becomes dazed, the soldier then starts punching him violently and finally kneeing him in the stomach. He stands over Outsider and pulls out his gun and says, “You lose.” But before he can pull the trigger, Outsider kicks the gun out of his hand and then kicks him hard on the side of the knee causing him to stumble.

Outsider gets up quickly and delivers a kick to the head and says, “You will never win.”



The rest of the group stands near Outsider, ready to fight. “When I find you again, I’ll kill you.” The elite soldier says as he begins to walk away.

“I’ll be waiting for you Bravo.” Outsider says before walking away with the group. After walking for awhile they arrive at the clinic. They head to the back.

“So where did you guys go?” Jack asks.

Awesome faceown to the old gym, just like we told Lasthope.” Outsider says.

“He didn’t tell us anything.” Jack says as he and the rest look at Lasthope reading an old magazine. Lasthope looks up at them and says, “Oh hey Matt and Elf, Outsider and Coltz went down to that old gym on dims Street. So Outsider where’s my magazine.” Lasthope says with a grin. Outsider looks at him for a second and then slaps him on the back of the head.



​“You’re a little bitch Outsider.” Lasthope says giving Outsider a dirty look as he rubs the back of his head.

Awesome faceude, if you say one more word I’m going to shoot you.” Outsider says.

“No you’re...” but as Lasthope says this, Outsider pulls out the gun Matt gave him and looks at Lasthope and says “Go ahead, say something.” Lasthope gives Outsider a look and goes back to reading his magazine. Outsider lowers the gun and proceeds to give it back to Matt.

“Here.” Outsider says. Matt looks at the gun and says,

“Not my gun, jacked it from a thug who refuse to pay me, you keep it.” Outsider puts the gun back on his belt clip.

“Well this is what we need, a hide out, weapons, equipment, and cash.” Outsider says. “We also need food cause fighting da man and his little brainless thugs works up an appetite.” Lasthope remarks while reading a magazine.

“Well I know of a place we can hide out, I used it as a lab but it’s big enough for all of us, not to mention hidden underground. It’s located in one of the dead zones, which isn’t that far from here. I’ll take you guys there.” Jack says.

“Okay then let’s go.” Outsider replies.

“Okay well before we get attacked again by someone who wants us dead; I say we get the hell out of here.” Coltz says. The group heads out of the clinic, Jack locks up for the night and leads the way to the hide out.

“You guys go ahead; Hope and I have to go take care of things.” Matt says.

“Fine, here’s the direction to the place, I’ll turn off the security but by ten there be up again.” Jack says.

“Two hours is enough time, we will see you guys there.” Matt says

The group heads out head down Elliot Street. The streets are empty with only the street lights shining down on the group. The group knew that Traveling at night was the best time to go through the city without being spotted and the most dangerous. The Peace officers turned in for the night except for a few unarmed guards patrolling a five-block radius per guard, making it the breeding ground for crime sprees, shoot outs with rival gangs, theft, grand theft auto, and just about every crime that can be committed by criminals and low lives. A reason wasn’t given why there was a lack of peace troopers during the night; though many have seen Fredrick B. Marhone the leader of the notorious crime organization the Black Mamba’s hanging with Lionel Belithem for three years, about the same time night forces were taken out.

After a few blocks, the group notices a man walking very fast down the street across them. Jack notices that the man doesn’t seem like one of the usual thugs but rather a business man type.

“Anyone out this late must have some kind of death sentence, either that or there really stupid,” Jack Thought to himself. Just then three Men come out from an alley way the man just pass. The three men follow him closely; the man senses them and begins to walk faster. The three men start walking faster as well. Soon the man starts to run with the three men behind him.

At that point Jack runs across the street following the men taking Dustin’s sword with him. One of the three men grabs the business man and throws him against the wall holding a knife against his throat.

The thug orders the frighten person for all is money. The frighten man punches the man with the knife and tries to run off but is stopped by the other two thugs.

“Please don’t kill me,” begged the man tearfully. The thug with the knife gets up rubbing the side of his face where he was just punched and says, “Too late for that.” He holds the man’s face and gets ready to slit his throat. Before he can, he stops; he looks down and notices a blade piercing out of his chest. The other two thugs let go of the guy and pull out their guns at Jack. Two loud cracks are heard and the two thugs fall where they stand. Coltz lowers his gun as the thug with the sword through his chest watches as the man he just tried to rob runs off.

“You’re probably wondering why you’re not dead yet. Well let me try to explain it for you,” Jack says still holding the sword. “You see this sword? Right now its in-between a very small space near you heart. It’s just sitting there now, but if I were to move just the slightest, it’d cut into your heart and kill you. But don’t worry, I’m a top surgeon. Now, this is what’s going to happen: I’m going to remove this sword from your chest and you’re going to go back to your home and clean up your life rather than be some pathetic criminal. Now, if for some reason you decide not to take the chance I’m giving you, I won’t kill you because it’s too dirty. Behind me, however, there a few people who aren’t as merciful as I am. They will do to you what they did to your friends over there. Do we have deal?” jack ask as the thug shakes his head with fear in his eyes.

Jack begins to slowly remove the sword from the thug’s chest, when the sword is almost out of his chest, a gunshot rings out and the thug drops to the floor. Jack looks back to see Outsider lowering his gun.

“Why the hell did you do that for?” Jack asks in confusion.

“He was wasting our time; it was easier to get rid of him.” Outsider replies. Jack looks at him with an angry stare. Before Jack can say anymore, a man comes up to outsider with a gun in front of his face.

The man appears to be in his early 20’s, with long black hair covered by a hoodie with the arms of the sweater hanging baggy black jeans with a long sleeve shirt with black metal plates somewhat scratched attach to the sides underneath a black t-shirt with the words Element written in red on the front.

“What do you want Cobra?” Outsider asks somewhat annoyed by the site of the man.

“I’m here for the money you owe me for the bombs.” Cobra replies.

“What are you talking about, I paid you when you handed me the C4.” Outsider protested.

“Yeah well, that was before I found about that it was going to be use to destroy an authority building.” Cobra replies still holding the gun in outsiders face.

​“I’m just going to take a while guess here and assume you both know each other.” Dustin says grabbing his sword from Jack.

​“Somewhat, I needed some explosives and someone recommended him, saying he was the best at turning big things into thousands of small things.” Outsider replies.

​“yeah but see you kind of left the part of you using MY C4 which can be linked back to me, to blow up a god damn government owned building!” Cobra says looking flustered.

“I might have forgotten to mention that part, did not think it was that important, besides the detonator you gave me wouldn’t even work. I had to hit it five times before it would work.” Outsider exclaimed. “Furthermore, even if I wanted to pay you I couldn’t, we need the money to buy weapons and other crap for a project”.

Cobra looks at him intrigued and says “Well I don’t know what this project is but I know some friends of mine who owe a favor. They ship weapons and ammunition from West Nortwoven (west part of Europe) to here, to parts of Australia. I’ll take you there for the thousand”

“Make it One-thousand.” Outsider says with a blank stare.

“Only one-thousand, forget it.” Cobra replies.

“One-thousand and I won’t kill you………yet.” Outsider says.

Awesome faceeal.” Cobra says bitterly. The group soon begins to follow Cobra with Jack still staring at Outsider angrily. As the group moves on, Dustin stops for second and looks up behind him, before moving on.

After ten minutes pass, they arrive to an old warehouse near the shore. Cobra knocks three times on the rusted warehouse door. A small rectangular panel opens in front of where Cobra is standing.

“Hey Crick, need that favor you owe me.” Cobra says. The panel closes, and the door opens, they enter. Inside, they see many crates and weapons ranging from ak-47 to mp-5 to magnum revolvers scattered all over the place. In the middle of the warehouse is a giant pool with a platform leading to 3-B series sub. A man with short green hair, wearing black pants with metal shin guards, and a chain mail shirt underneath a nano chest piece closes the door behind them before walking pass them to load guns into a crate.

“Okay group, that right there is Crick-head, Crick for short. He’s call that cause well during a chat session over a novas comb link, someone misspelled his original name resulting in his new name, and well it short of stuck.” Cobra says pointing to the man with green hair “The guy over there next to the sub, we call him OC cause he really got into that T.V show that’s on syndication on TV Land by the same name.” Continued Cobra pointing to the man next to the sub with black spiked hair, wearing a pair of silver goggles with black lens around his neck along with a dog tag that read Sam Boneleck, he also wore Blue jeans with a black shirt and grey gloves. The guy behind us wearing the coat, his name is fish eyes.”

“Why they call him that?” Jack asks.

“He eats fish eyes as a snack.” Cobra answers. “Huh, well at least he’s getting protein out of it.” Replies Jack.

Cobra walks over to where Crick is, with Outsider right behind him.

“So Crick, need that favor you owe me.” Cobra says.

“What do you want?” asked Crick packing up various weapons.

“Okay, from what they told me before we got here, this guy and his little posse over there need some weapons and ammo to start up a rebellion against Telos. So can you guys help out?” Cobra asks

Crick turns around with an Ak-47 in his hand and says “Sure why not.”

“Really, you’re willing to help us?” Outsider asks.

“We can understand what you want; we feel the same way to. Believe it or not but the three of us weren’t always sneaking weapons and people all over the world.” Crick says.

“What do you mean people?” Outsider asks. “Yeah, we get people out of here and other places and bring them to either Australia or Other various places where we set up underground shelters. O.C over there was the one who started it. Most likely due to the fact he was held up in an internment camp for like 2 years before he broke out. Sad part is all his friends and family died. He still blames himself for it and would do anything to kill the one responsible for it, sad really.” Crick says.

“Well thanks for your help and you guys are welcome to join if……” Before Outsider could finish, an explosion rings out through the warehouse, everyone is caught off guard as the door is blast into pieces. As the smoke begins to clear, Shots are fired, six of which hit Bug-eye, killing him instantly. Everyone pulls out there weapons and find cover.

“WHAT THE **** MAN, CAN’T WE GO ANYWHERE WITHOUT GETTING SHOT AT!” Outsider shouts.

“Tell me about it.” Coltz says under his breath. The gun fire stops as 20 men enters the warehouse, who are all wearing white shirts with black pants and ski masks. One of the guys is dress in a black shirt with ripped blue jeans steps into the warehouse holding a shotgun on his left shoulder.

“Olkay which of chou is called Outsidur.” the man asks. The man is Columbian, possibly thirty four, with long black spiked hair. He’s wearing sunglasses and has a scar running down the side of his right cheek. Outsider comes out from cover, looking at Dustin who was next to him before nodding. Outsider looks at the man who lowers his shotgun off his shoulder.

He walks over to him, stopping three feet from him.

“So chyou are thie dumbass who stuffed a lit cigarl down thie throat of thie son of clime lord Iggie Williams, Chyou must have a death lish.” The man says.

“Possibly.” Outsider answers with a grin.

“Chou dies then.” The man says aiming his shotgun at Outsider.

A shotgun blast rings through the warehouse. Outsider opens his eyes and finds the man on the ground unconscious with Dustin standing over him as his MLPI flashes red. The rest of the group fires back, giving Outsider and Dustin a chance to dive for cover. The twenty men start shooting back. Soon the group begins to run out of ammo and start breaking into the crates there ducked behind.

“There’s no way we can win this one, get everyone to the back. We have a sub back there.” Crick says to Outsider.

Outsider nods and begins to order everyone to the back. Erif provides some cover for them as they make their way to the back. An explosion is heard from outside the warehouse, one of the men orders some to go outside. Dustin looks back to see what’s going on outside but can’t see anything; the rest of the group however pays no attention as they enter the sub. The sub heads out as bombs, ammo and grenades go off inside the warehouse destroying it.

Two hours later, the sub lands near Hallandale Beach. They head off on foot but not before sinking the sub. The group heads out to their destination. After walking for three hours the group reach dead zone two four seven, one of the many cities hit by a hydrogen bomb. Jack leads them to where a building once stood. All that was left of it were a few walls and rubble. They make their way to a red upside down table which looks out of place in a place full of nothing more than rubble and dust, Jack moves the table to reveal a staircase leading into the ground. When they reach the bottom of the stairs, the group find themselves down a long dark hall. Jack pulls out a flashlight and leads them down the hall

“This place use to be part of a federal building belonging to the U.S back when it was in power. I was assign to find any survivors when I found this place, I decided not to report it thinking I could use it one day. The place has one big room and a hallway that leads to thirteen other smaller and a hangar, all of which is powered by a nearby subway tunnel.” Jack says

They soon come to a steel door with a card reader attach to it. Jack pulls out a card and slides it through the card reader. The door opens revealing a huge lit room. Rusted metal panels cover the walls; a flat fifty inch screen is seen on the left hand side of the room, wires are scattered around with a couch in the middle of the room. Matt comes out of a hallway located on the right aiming a gun at them.

“It’s just them hope.” Matt says lowering his gun.

Hope sits up on the couch holding a magazine.

“Where did you guys go?” Coltz asks while looking around.

“We stopped by the bank to get our money out. We figured they would lock our accounts, and you can’t get by without money. We got about two hundred thousand dollars between the both of us, which is not going to last long.” Hope replies.

“Okay so this is probably going to be our hideout till this is done with. We will eat, sleep, and plan here.” Outsider says.

“Okay cool but what’s our team name?” Lasthope asks.

“How about team America, seeing how that was once our country” Cobra suggested

“**** yeah, you have Guitar Hero 14: flashback edition.” Coltz says spotting the game machine.

“No, so many rebel groups use it that it’s not even funny anymore. We will name ourselves after the three heroes of freedom, branded as traitors like we are now, Echo, X-Ray, Omega. We are eXo..

So there we go, all credit to Cobra-D.
also tl;dr.. READ IT YOU FAG stare :2k7:
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08-01-2011, 07:42 PM #2
Only Cobra could write something this amazing.

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08-01-2011, 07:46 PM #3
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>mfw that's the plot outline of Homefront and Ghot Recon: Future Soldier.

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08-01-2011, 07:50 PM #4
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Thats ****ing long, I read to the half, I love it :happycry: I'm a read the rest :fyea:, So far Its a Great story. :y:
08-01-2011, 07:50 PM #5
DreamKidzVa
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Cobra is going to hate on this, but hey.. Haters Gon Hate :fyea:
08-01-2011, 09:14 PM #6
I read some , i'll read the rest later.
08-01-2011, 09:35 PM #7
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whatever happened to part two Cobra? HUH?! :FU:

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08-01-2011, 10:24 PM #8
Originally posted by DreamKidzVa View Post
Cobra is going to hate on this, but hey.. Haters Gon Hate :fyea:


Naw, He gave me permission to post it. :fyea:
08-01-2011, 10:33 PM #9
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I am almost finished. Holdon brb. Finishing up stare
08-01-2011, 10:40 PM #10
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I'm not reading that. It's like a whole book.

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