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Here I am telling you the words I never said
While ya'll out partying, there's children that end up dead
Why the fuck we got soldiers dyin out there for no reason
9/11 wasn't set up its what the governments got us believin
All we all we is to have some world peace
But we cant do that when everyone walks around with a piece
We're in a world where guns are used as the answer
With people that say "Those bullets had him movin like a dancer"

See while your bitchin bout you dont have heat
There's kids in Africa who don't even got shoes on they feet
Were so caught up in the shit we dont know where to look
We got kids thinkin they go hard cause they got 50 likes on FaceBook
These days people think its fun to go take others lives
I want you to go confront that mama while she cries
When your closest friend says he got your back but its all lies
When they choose drugs over you, thats why I cant look in your eyes
If you went in my mind it would be a crazy trip
I would spray all of ya'll down with my lyrical clip
When I close my eyes and look into my head
All I see are the words that I wish I said



Well thats it, if you want you can drop a verse too. I would love opinions on this also. If you want to be negative, tell me what I should improve on =D

this is legit yo , lol its cool :y:

It's still not better than mine though :p. Or is it :lol:?

This Reminds me of Immortal Technique.

I :lol: at that pretty good over all but that was my favorite part.

Im a go hard, so these words stick in your head like glue,
get it spread until they all scream the letters NGU,
the place to go for stereotypical immunity,
the place to be in a socially active community,
wether your posh, or have no decorum,
theres a place for everyone on this forum,
so people here this shit theyre like wheres this dude from,
so stand up tell em loud tell em proud,
this sick white rappers from nextgenupdate.com

Sounds like half of those lines were from other songs. Do your own thing, invent your own style.

I thought the same thing, but i didnt wanna say anything in case i was wrong and got owned ahah but at least im not alone

Show me where you could have heard this?