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05-31-2012, 04:06 PM #1
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She called me crying last night, and I tried to calm her down.. but she had already cut herself. I understand her pain because I used to cut. So I wrote this after.



The World is shining brightly,
but I know you cannot see,
the pain and hurt are blinding you,
you struggle to get free,
and so you cut away the pain,
and hold your troubles in,
the tears are dripping from your wrist,
they're oozing from within.




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05-31-2012, 04:11 PM #2
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nice poem im couldn't even think of something like that but great poem man Smile
05-31-2012, 04:16 PM #3
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I wish my lawn was like your girlfriend...then it would cut itself :carling:...j/k nice poem by the way.
05-31-2012, 04:25 PM #4
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What the fuck ? Seh cut herself and then call you ? No but nice poem ..
05-31-2012, 05:33 PM #5
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Originally posted by NeedaFapSoon View Post
What the fuck ? Seh cut herself and then call you ? No but nice poem ..


To be exact she text me saying "i'm turning my phone off until friday".
I called to see why but she didn't answer, she text saying that she'll not answer because she's crying. I called again and she answered, sobbing down the phone.

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05-31-2012, 05:44 PM #6
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Originally posted by cK
She called me crying last night, and I tried to calm her down.. but she had already cut herself. I understand her pain because I used to cut. So I wrote this after.



The World is shining brightly,
but I know you cannot see,
the pain and hurt are blinding you,
you struggle to get free,
and so you cut away the pain,
and hold your troubles in,
the tears are dripping from your wrist,
they're oozing from within.






great poem! i wouldn't be able to make something like that :y:

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05-31-2012, 07:41 PM #7
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You must login or register to view this content. Nice poem though, never cut myself or even thought about it and don't know anybody that does from what I'm aware of. But I have never been in a real depressed time in my life yet I guess so I wouldn't understand but nice poem.

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